open mic
 

open mic right
that means i can say what ever i like
well check it im a poltergist right
i walk through walls
i have no flaws
no one touch me right
literelry they would go through me
and surely get a fright
some bitch went for my balls
only to discover im the mystical type
all she got was air
man she could'nt crab my might
all i have is time as im immortal
so i grabbed her by the hair
and i started to pull
untill her scalp came off
her brain got quiet a chill
then i sowed it right back on
cos it made me kind of ill
i gave her a mouthful of jack
and a valume pill!

Accept ur battle

it was...nvrm.....work on it dawg...u'll be ill if u elevate...open up...

wack

thi was really wack.. work on ur stuff a little harder.. dont rush so much... just take ur time.. ur never gonna be good if u try and hurry

You seemed rushed. You can tell you dont add alot of thought. Make you lines a little longer too. You definetly need some work. Im not the one to be sayin things but It was a little worse than my first spit. Dont worry though, listen to everyones advice and you'll elevate.