Life's Injustice'system'
 

Deprive'd Of Pride, 17 year's of my life was-led'
Hypnotic-hype-world's crumblin'over'nights-bed
Lookin outside to breath there and see sun's red
But still in the street, there a buncha'fuckin Blood-shed

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Life is like, A box of viagra' It gets Harder as you'move'on,
How do you think' Pornstar's-Get-Goodlife's, Wit out gettin there groves'on'
Steering-wheel's, Life turn's 2, Ever thought of an injustice' was brought-2-u'
Talking shit, Violent-Type, On top Like giant's "antz"We'll squash'u'2

Talking about afghani war's, Look at them we raped there villages'like'whores'
Smoked there men, Like cuban'cigar's Killin them without'openin'door's
Now look at life through eyes of war, Lookin at kid's with tear's inside
Wish I was there, Cus'then we'd ride, shoot-2-die'

Now-Look-Into these dream's, Ery' girl love's twinkie's Cuzza'the'cream'
Its ok im on the scene, Never get mad, Cuz I get mean'
I do know these thing's fade, Like barbra walter's And that marriage of gays'
I know these lines get played', If u think so, Fuck you'And'have fabulous'day'

This piece was truly amazung dawg...everythang you've been spittin lately has been fire...shit is tight as hell...feelin tha topic...nice multies and wordplay...flow was there throughout but at some parts your bars seemed to be just a LITTLE BIT stretched...not much tho...I liked this piece...8/10