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LEazy 09-03-04 04:18 PM

You gotta feed back on this keystyle!
 
It's a quick keystyle...gimmie some feed back.


I move percise so niggas know i'm nothing nice//
Swing wild wit the knife in attempt to steal another mans life//
I pump the weight on every block so I keep plenty of guns//
While most of these so called thugs are never strapped like Air Force Ones//
I creep at night so no soul can stop my movements//
And I stay away from the Ds like straight A students//
There isn't much that I can't handle...murder any beef//
Wit a aim that's not ment to whitenin your teeth//
Heavy in the hood so I hold plenty of juice//
Wit a flow off the chains like a dog runnin loose//
An important cat no time for jokes cause i'm about my money//
So do you or you'll be saying wassup to the doc more then Bug Bunny//
Look alive kid your witnessing greatness//
So when this is done watch mad fake rappers hate this//

Gimmie some feed back...lord knows i'm given mad feed to people.

LEazy 09-03-04 10:25 PM

uppin for some feed!

Replay 09-03-04 10:40 PM

not bad it a little rough around the egdes. I wasn't see the point to it and it was kinda all around but still got 6/10


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