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Trying To Elevate
I'm surrounded by evil....they wanna enter my soul//
I love to spit that antifreeze....and leave em out in the cold// Ready to bleach the whole scene....and make my message "stain-free"// And laugh at my foes....cuz those hos are mangy// I rest heads under hedges// Mainly cuz they tried to shine....I pushed them over the ledges// And hip hop is my fetish....I don't regret it// All-comers get peeled like heads of lettuce// E-Town...ain't no one realer// Tombstones sayin',"Damn, he shouldn't have messed with that killa!!"// Niggaz think they hard....cuz drugs they dealin'// I'm a hurt they feelins'// Spittin' silver in hearts like blood villians// I'm straight chillin'....just without the chronic// I make whole scenes ugly....like projectile vomit// I'm like a moshpit....currupt and destructive// Niggaz is silly and soft....like muffins and Mupphets// Trying to elevate. |
yo, i may be new to dis site but not to rap and dat was pretty good, so keep elevatin, u on yo way dog
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I appreciate that responds, man. I'm just trying to get back into mid-season shape.
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yo hommie i think your already back,,you just have to believe it now,,,,because i do,
7-10,,nice drop |
Thanks, ya'll...that's mad motivation for ya boi.
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thats my nigga sultan...
big up to my boi..fa sho... we gettin' out of the hood...bling nigga bling |
Looks like yo elevatin fosho. I rated it like in a battle cuz I gotta lot a time on my hands and I turned out.. 40/50... So B-. Pretty sick punchlines in there. Keep at it... Wishen I had the skills, time and patience ta elevate.
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sultan you should noit feel happy for what these homos said because they are all wack, but that was great piece,perfect example at using the stucture tha multies and the internals in your verses
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yeah not a bad drop at all just keep workin hard...
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sux ya mum.................
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