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NoMercy vs schema
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10 Lines or more No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 09-04-04 at 03:26 AM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 02:56 AM.
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NoMercy has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 02:57 AM.
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schema has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 02:58 AM.
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husslen little bitches like "schema" makes people look at me delirious/
dropen you fast no bullets to take makes me feel mysterious/. im a danderious rapper, my styles strong and imperious/ dont make me put it down write to the fact cuz then it gets serious/. ill put you to the ground and pop punches to your head/ kick you while your down on the ground and make you fall dead/. when i rap its like im a sharp knife blade ready to slit yer throat/ but ill do it anyway just to harass you, and control yer life like it was a remote/. now think about it ill win no matter what you think about-me/ see me over the hill maybe but dont think that you can scout-me/. take you out with lots of threats but no tricks to your face/ catch you stalkin me in the back alley, ill ask did you solve the case?/. think about me everyday verious times what you think your precarious/ stop you and punch you in the face my home boys are laughin cuz its hilarious/. you took it all like you were the oldest sales men from the sea's/ but ill just catch you and drop you to your knee's and make you freeze/. put a fake gun to yer head just to scare you in your pants/ you thought you could dance and pull some shit like k-os's b-boy stance/. now are you haven problems with your finance?/ maken cheap bills, cant produce and get women cuz you aint got romance/. |
well im done my quick freestyle lol well i kno you cant see it but peace we'll see who wins
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you wanna beat me better hope theyve got me rolled up in a hearse
for you to win id have to have a heart attack 'fore i post up my verse... your evened up at four and four but about to smack your ass cross-eyed fuck with me ill leave ya record a little heavy on the loss side... your skills is garbage...wackest shit i ever seen a kid-do your sig's masked up...he dont wanna be seen with-you... you always drop wack..."yo but my rhymes is ill when i really drop dogg" hope you not lyin cause "what I'm really made of" is sicker than a hot dog... i said ten to twelve lines you begged me for a bigger limit how many lines you need for "schema copped a squat on me and shitted"... look back over your shit...please come harder than your last four i see where you got your name cause mercy's something people ask for... hot dogs are made of disgusting left over cow parts...you get it werd... |
well you got good metas real good metas and multi's and punches but not stucture and vocab im still learning give me credit im young lol
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ha nobody gives a fuck about structure...somebody will clown on you for putting those /'s on the end of your bars...my vocab was mad simple but its 330 in the morning what do you want...ha...youre focusing too much on rhyming and not enough on punching...you got aim? ill help you out some with your shit if you want...
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Voted For: schema
I felt schemas verse more but i felt yall were on the self glory side of things to be honest ya know...structure went to Schema Mercy ya had sum nice punches and came harder on the wordplay front too...overall really i think that schema took this easily...RTF on mas sig |
This was feedback posted for NoMercy
just check'n this out .
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Voted For: schema
I think schema has got this one.... his flow was ebtter and he had more wordplay....... he also had some good punches..... I liked your last like.... that was a nice ending!!! NoMercy... yhou werent bad.... alright wordplay... i didnt realy like your structure.... but some of it was ok..... you had a couple good punches that i liked.. but your last line was too spaced out.. your first line was short and your last one was like 2 x longer... But good job Overall Schema V/ Schema |
Voted For: NoMercy
nomercy cuz he had more word play and had way better punches...8/10 flow was ok and so was structure...7/10 schema you had good punches but werent really hard...5/10 you flow was off and it threw me off...2/10 you structure was good...5/10 v/nomercy... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
yo thanks but try and in explain whitch person you were talkign about lol
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