X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X vs sHoTTaBoY
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 06:44 AM

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X-NaUgHtY-bOy-X has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 06:44 AM.

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sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 06:48 AM.

yo dis nigga is changing me//
i will make this ass c//how good i am//
shotta go find ur pram//
telll ur mummy to give u ur dummy//
getting pushed down the street his doing his baby hummy//
this transexual to gay to battle some pro like me//
hes is some gay nigga as u can c//
this guys never gonna win me//
as u can proabley c//
i got this 1 5-nill down//
hes just trying not to frown//
coz hes is gonna be down//
after i kick hes fuck ass//
i kick its so its mass//
coem on man u vote 4 him//
ur like sooooo dim//
i got 3/5 votes just in 1 min//
this guy is gonna be k.oed//
by 2secs of his verse//
ya that was my curse//
i just cursed this niggas ass//
this guy is gayer than a mass//
there no point in his spilting his verse//
coz its gonna be crap bcoz i just curse//
this it is 1-0 on my record//
this guy lost this 11-9 on his record//

Man, This Fuck Callin Himself 'NAUGHTY BOY'.....
He Got It From His Momma When She Spanks Him n Tests Out Her New TOY..(Dildo)
...Soon As I Accepted This Battle I Got My Sights Set To DESTROY.......
I Got A Theory n Its That This BITCH Is So Pussy I Think Its A TOMBOY..!!!!

This Kat Outta His League, He Wanted To Battle A NEWB..
Up I Stepped n Exposed This Fool Of His Secrets With The ANAL LUBE..
Man I'm Sorry...I Hate To Break It 2 U, But Ya Came From A TEST TUBE...!!
I'ma Sell Dope 2 Ya Sister n Make Her Sick Like The Nigguhz With Attitude....(In The Track Dopeman It Says ''Sold Crack To My Sister n Made Her Sick'')

Man, I Can Open Ya Emotional Doors Like A CD ROM...
This Is Over n I'ma Give U The Link So Yuh Can Sign Up 4 ImerkNIGGUHZ.com..!!!!!!

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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

break down

Naughty

your verse didnt flow well at all....the structure was off horribly the vocab lacked i didnt see any real punches from you in this verse.....some advice is to try and make your bars longer....that will help you next battle.....you didnt have ne multies or metaphore so this verse was preety much basic so im gonna have to give u a 3 out of ten.........
Overall=3/10

Shotty

you verse was a little bit better the verse was structured well so it was easy to read......i didnt really see ne personals but u just came with better punches in this one....thats what seperated a win from a loss for you....it was your last line that seperated it....
Overall=5/10

good battle from both.......much props

when u get a chance stop by and drop a vote....thanx
Sole*

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY


Man, This Fuck Callin Himself 'NAUGHTY BOY'.....
He Got It From His Momma When She Spanks Him n Tests Out Her New TOY..(Dildo)

lol nice 6/10
...Soon As I Accepted This Battle I Got My Sights Set To DESTROY.......
I Got A Theory n Its That This BITCH Is So Pussy I Think Its A TOMBOY..!!!!
dont get it 4/10

This Kat Outta His League, He Wanted To Battle A NEWB..
Up I Stepped n Exposed This Fool Of His Secrets With The ANAL LUBE..
lololol nice personal 6/10
Man I'm Sorry...I Hate To Break It 2 U, But Ya Came From A TEST TUBE...!!
I'ma Sell Dope 2 Ya Sister n Make Her Sick Like The Nigguhz With Attitude....(In The Track Dopeman It Says ''Sold Crack To My Sister n Made Her Sick'')

ehh decent 5/10

Man, I Can Open Ya Emotional Doors Like A CD ROM...
This Is Over n I'ma Give U The Link So Yuh Can Sign Up 4 ImerkNIGGUHZ.com..!!!!!!

nice closer 6/10


yo dis nigga is changing me//
i will make this ass c//how good i am//
didnt rhyme 2/10
shotta go find ur pram//
telll ur mummy to give u ur dummy//
getting pushed down the street his doing his baby hummy//
wtf was that 2/10
this transexual to gay to battle some pro like me//
hes is some gay nigga as u can c//
ehh 3/10
this guys never gonna win me//
as u can proabley c//
wack 2/10
i got this 1 5-nill down//
hes just trying not to frown//
coz hes is gonna be down//
cheap 2/10
after i kick hes fuck ass//
i kick its so its mass//
dont get it 1/10
coem on man u vote 4 him//
ur like sooooo dim//
i got 3/5 votes just in 1 min//
wack 2/10
this guy is gonna be k.oed//
by 2secs of his verse//
ya that was my curse//
cheap 2/10
i just cursed this niggas ass//
this guy is gayer than a mass//
used same rhymes 1/10
there no point in his spilting his verse//
coz its gonna be crap bcoz i just curse//
SAME RHYMES 0/10
this it is 1-0 on my record//
this guy lost this 11-9 on his record//
SAME WORDS 000.000/10




Punch: Shot
Personal: shot
V/: shot

boy, urs was wack no hate vote tho..... just dont use same rhymes

Tomboy Is A Chick Who Dresses n Pretends Its A Boy..........
Destroy, U Dont Know What Destroy Means?
Uhm, Okay.....
....But Appreciate The Votes...
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Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

My vote goes to Shotta. He just had more punchlines. He caught my attention with his creativity. Plus, I could actually understand what the hell he was saying. Naughty needs to hit the books.

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

My vote goes to shottaboy becuz his punches were hard den naughty-boy's...tha flow was decent...and tha structure was aight...both of tha versus were okay, but shotta took this one...tha punches were just harder...

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

naughty no good punches or disses flow and structure was off a bad verse no hate dont get madd elevate .shotta opener lol funny shit good second bar diss good structure and flow good ender too punches could have been better but they were decent and disses hit good shit a easy win