RobKilla vs mookie
 

Battle Rules:

1. 10-16 lines
2. Dis a crew battle LOWRYDERZ vs. psa
3. No Crew Votes (obviously)
4. No Recycling
5. No Biting
6. Come wit it...
i had to set tha check in time for really long cuz im outta town...

Minimum posts to vote: 75

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 08:27 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

mookie has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 01:20 PM.

PSA GOT THIS check it

im the illest nigga alive watch me prove it/
snatch the mic withyour hand still attach to it/
your crew use beats for help we help the beats/
who want it with village pimp?G.deuce and me/
if i say so myself its a beautiful three/
so PSA bussin them caps what now you cryin aint no lyin/
Mooks fire will grill ya hamburger beef ill french fry em/
and i aint scared ill bring to your weakass crew/
and when im talkin bout bussin caps im basically talkin to u/
and bullets comin out the barrel going straight fo your leader watch his ass fall/
we put chill pills in ya brain our bullets lik tylenol/
and even if yall think about bussin back thats fine/
you and ur crew all gon get merked sooner or later matter of time/
and u and ur crew keep walkin round keep standing tall/
PSA will size your ass down wit grenades and chainsaws/
and it dont matter if you retaliate..cause will bounce back and HIT U HARDER THAN MEDICINE BALLS

RobKilla has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 11:54 PM.

You can 4get this "match," i "set" lames- you'll get jammed brother
cuz "Mookie" sounds like a pet name from his grandmother
You "brag" about smokin "weed"... at least thats what i heard
well, "you are what you eat"- so you "proud" to be an "herb"
Rappin is not your best trait so step back
you like michael jackson in a 5th grade class- you just "wack"
I gotta knock this fella straight, his rhymes is hella poor
you couldnt "elevate" if you lived on tha "92nd floor"
all ya raps is spittin dumb shit like colorful parrots
you gone retire wit a merked list shorter than J Lo marriage

we need need some votes shawdy uppin

Voted For: mookie

better punches
better rhymes
and more better disses

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This was feedback posted for RobKilla
 

lol Rob is sick, lol he took mookie too school, anyone who votes for mookie is wack

Voted For: RobKilla

rob you took it

better all around

meta, personals punches the whole 9 yards
nice drop

good structure and flow

mookie you need a lil work

Voted For: RobKilla

i vote for rob cuz his shit connected more to me.and most of his punches stood out there, making his verse better. Using wat he heard to his advantage, and dats kool

uppin plz we need sum mo votes

yo still need votes ill return da favor holl+a6

chek tha sig... RobKilla aint neva hated by many son... you sadly mistaken... you too young to try and get on my level anyway... ^^^ this cat is 13

Voted For: RobKilla

hhahah nice battle alota good stuff but it was kinda one side in my very own opinion

Mooki: ya was ok alotta flaws and not very much connected but its iight ya had not good flow and ya strucutre was a lil offf ya punches were not as good and so were ya personals try harder next time

ROb: nice verse overall nice wordplay and good ya had some nice personals and good punches ya strucutre was a lil off and samme to ya flow

VOte: robkilla

please rtf in my battle here and give a good long vote
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