Wicked One vs luminaz
 

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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 10:59 AM.

luminaz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 11:00 AM.

the time has come for wicked one,
to show whether or not he gon get some,
pull out my gat to splat dis wicked cunt,
dis boy think cos he got a chain that he stunt,
the only way u stunt is off the cliff when u jump,
wicked one think he ill but he rele got the mumps,
i think he shud chill with his crew of diseased wicked chumps-
that think they thump when they punch -
but all they make is a little bruised lump,
i cant take anymore of this poor excuse for a wicked one,
so ima leve u alone in this battle.....confused n spun.

when I spit ima send you too your death like war criminals
stick and move your punches perhaps when ya think tha beating has stopped?? i'll start with the subliminals
drop kick the fuck out of your raps just like I did to that nigga naps
pull your ass off the tracks cus im doing victory laps
make you wishin you diddn't look at my raps
can't wait till your mouth flaps
so my rhymes torture you soul like christ
ill tie u on to the cross im like the cyber hittler commaning your halocust
don't tell me your flows money and you got lots rhymes you could floss
I steal your dough like a greedy crimeboss who wont stop doesn't mattr how much it would cost
police can't catch me

Voted For: luminaz

luminaz to simple
wicked one gets it

upin for votes honestly and il return the fava
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148015

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dam put that in the wrong place
shit sorry wicked one :huh: :huh:

Voted For: Wicked One

he had sum nice punches and his structure was pretty good tha reason i voted for this guy is i couldnt understand tha other niggas rap plus this kat had nice punches

Voted For: Wicked One

omg,weak ass battle ya'll need ta try harder seriously this shit was'nt very good..were are the punches??
luminaz,no complexity in your verse at all i mean it looked like you wrote that in 10 seconds...?..wicked one..punches were stretched but at least you sorta had a couple...meta's n vocab go to wicked one also but ya both need alot of elevation...nuff said

upppin......for votes.....leave a link if yall want.......

Voted For: luminaz

both of y'all suck...but i voted for you becuz your structure was slightly better, and your rap was easier to understand

Voted For: Wicked One

Wicked One your punches were good/but i didnt think they were good enough but good/your verse was aight too/your structure was off at times/ i think you should elevate on your structure/Luminaz your punches were aight they kind of sucked man/your verse kind of sucked too so pretty much iam going to give this one to Wicked because of his punches/

v/Wicked

Voted For: Wicked One

NICE BATTLE--
VOTE WICKED 1--
BETTER
PUNCHES
VERSE
MUL
MET
ETC..WICKED 1 WIN EASY
V/ WICKED 1

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Voted For: Wicked One

Aiiiiiiight

easy to see who got this...

more complexed verse, with hard hittin punches n ebtter vocab...
nice drop wicked..

luminaz, ya flow was aight, step ya game up, i failed to see a hard hittin punch, or a decent personal, you need elevation, try mixin styles up an hittin punches, (no hate) ...u just wasnt on the same level as wicked..

return the favor

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