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Triple_N 09-04-04 10:30 PM

Decree Wun vs Triple_N
 
Battle Rules:

2:30 max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
5 hours to drop after check

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 10:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 09-04-04 10:31 PM

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 10:31 PM.

System 09-04-04 10:32 PM

Decree Wun has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-04-04 10:32 PM.

Decree Wun 09-05-04 01:08 AM

aiight my shits done... www.soundclick.com/ceestylezmusic.htm

Triple_N 09-05-04 01:29 AM

Here's lyrics

1st ya killa boy but only killed ya rec
Ya talent's as visible as ruben studdards neck
You founded "rapid erosion" occurin' on bay
Cuz from ya 1st line on ya verses wither away
U wouldn't be hot "residin' on mercury"
Your my inferior with irrefutable certainty
"Capitolize" ya letters an etch'em in pavement
Still none of ya punches will make a bold statement
Ya fans are fairytales, cuz they don't exist
Ya CD wouldn't get spins on the earth's axis
I jus laugh when this nigga claims to thug it
When he strain's a muscle dunkin' a chicken nugget
Challengin' me took some sheer audacity
I drop harder than elevators over capacity
Ya punches don't understand "gravity of situation"
But ya weakass flow gives'em vendication

Ya known to "lyrically deconstruct" on ya verses
Skillz like homeless women with gucci purses
Fuckin' assanine, why do you even bother?
I easily already sonned you and ya father
Ya unseen on rv like strobe's transactions
Shittin' on ya track for its deserved reaction

Who gave you decree to ruin good beats
Ya desirability's equal to afterbirth sheets
Spits could be "recovered patient" an not do well
Spray ya lyrics wit lysol, dat'll cover the smell
Like santa this nigga seein' me's a wish
Cuz my spits wetter than bottom of soapdish
My flows soothin' like sound of birds hummin'
Man, I sonned this nigga without even "cummin"
For me people stay developin' affinity
This lyrical "columbus" claims authenity
Ya lyrically embarassin', nigga u need to stop
On the job this nigga couldn't "punch da clock"
Ya decree's a joke, an this battle's a wrap
Cuz this "state capitol" was never "put on the map"

For those that don't know, decree means-->Authority

Ah'ight here's the link, good luck to opponent

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/battlepagesmusic.htm

[.:D:.] 09-05-04 01:50 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

ima have to vote for you dawg....

ya verse was overall betta....ya track had more of ya professional sound..betta quality..ya dubs was mixxed in good not to loud or nuffin..ya punches were hard..and they was funny..especially bout ruben but hey..ima big nigga too..ya flow was good...good wordplay too

Decree...man you need to work on ya quality fa real...ya beat was ok..ya punches werent really hittin as hard as triples...seemed like u didnt have no emotion..ya flow was ok but on some parts it was kinda messed up..need to make it sound more professional too cuz thats important..and the lil thing shootin him was weak to me..so improve on that stuff

but dont give up just dont take my shit as hate just tips on how to improve...

Decree Wun 09-05-04 01:59 AM

no no my shit wasnt weak..it was WACKKK..yes i sed it..oh well....anywayz thanx for da honest vote dawg.....and for all yall niggaz that peeped my tracks i do have emotion its jus that i aint home so i cant scream or da wat eva but im reachin home tomorrow so then u'll see da tru shit of me

iamthatdude87 09-05-04 04:27 AM

This was feedback posted for Triple_N
 
gud battle

Terumoto 09-05-04 06:21 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

aight

DW:
hmm.. shit quality, but i aint judgin on that... but u should really invest in a mic.. cos u got the voice n lyrics, just lackin the quipment.

flow was on point.. lines were average, despite a few hard punches. Wordplay was ok. But man, i seen you come WAY harder than this.. beat wasnt too bad.. i was feelin ya delivery, cept for quality

Trip: lmao @ the closer... haha..
nice flow, nice beat. good punches, n personals.. ill delivery.. was a good audio

schema 09-05-04 06:33 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

aboslute merking...

decree you sounded like you were spittin in a closet...like you were all quiet and shit...your punches werent really that hard hitting...you are new at audio obviously but its no hate involved you just need confidence in your voice because anything you say with confidence is gonna sound funnier and harder-hitting than if you mumble it or say it real quiet even if you are saying the same shit...you gotta sound like you are really mad at him not like you are embarrassed to be spittin you get what im sayin...its all good though im sure youll find your presence with practice...

triple_n you sounded comfortable on the beat you had some ill punches and just all-around better verse...you have more of an audio presence but I expected that since you are more of an audio vet...but yeah this sounded like some shit i would actually hear on a mixtape...

Phenom-in-all 09-05-04 09:42 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

wow... decree - your quality was ASS. Beat was aight, and ya flow was pretty good for ya first battle. Best line: "My shit never gets old like my name was peter pan". Other than that though - nothing really grabbed me, and wasn't too impressed. 5/10

Triple - Flow is smooth man, good looks. Quality was alot better. Nice opener fa real
"1st ya killa boy but only killed ya rec
Ya talent's as visible as ruben studdards neck"
Punches was all there, and this was a easy win here. Not much for multis, but decree had none either so whatever. 7/10

v/ Triple N

DV8 09-05-04 09:56 AM

Voted For: Triple_N

aight triple n got this in my opinion,delivery was well done n you had good clarity in your audio,i liked most of your punches n felt you came out with good flow n did'nt drop off finisher was nice name play was deffinately there 2...don't vote on audio's often but this was really good in my opinion
nice drop triple n......
decree your sound wasnt very nice n had a hard time hearing most of your punches lisened to it a couple times but still jus did'nt feel your drop much,the freestyle at the end was kinda like you were jus speaking i found you had no flow with it...
but i guess you jus started audio so props on that,you'll get better..


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