optimized vs ShackleS
 

Battle Rules:

10 quick Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-05-04 at 02:43 PM

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optimized has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 02:14 PM.

ShackleS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 02:15 PM.

i blast and crush ya skill's u a laugh-thou
cause befor i started u was already on lock with shackles
i'll grab ya adem then feed da dogs your apple
and u better of fall back from this like a tackle
fuck a record i'll crush ya voice box
evaperating ya spit like lips on moesit glock
your a man? but act like a boy it seems
that got this battle ova ya head like i bashed ya head into the computer screen
r.v have no use for your shit like we taking a piss
and only time people feel ya spits is with your sloopy ass kiss


freestyle

Man You Pm'd Me I Dunno You Must Wanna Be Merked Twice Over ...
Damn You Couldn't Win This battle If You Wrote Wit A Four Leaf Clover ...
Tha Last Time You Lost It Was 5-0 Straight K-0 Wanna Be Repeated ...
People Don't Usually Like Bein Merked But I Can't Help It U Simply Pleaded ...
Beatin You Is Like Like An Orgasm Coz Its Givin Me So Much Pleasure ...
You Get More Delivered L's Than An Evo"L"ope And
A "L"etter ...
Shit Min This Is Already Over Yo Strobe Quickly Click This Closed~Man ...
U Go Door~to~door Beggin For Votes Handin Leaflets Like Tha Postman ...
Man You Like A Fish Hangin On Tha End Of Ma Sharp~"Lines" ...
U Could Out Wit Toddlers Yea Den You'd Definatly wanna Of Da Smart~Minds ...

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Voted For: ShackleS

You Get More Delivered L's Than An Evo"L"ope And
A "L"etter ...

That was the line that got him this win in my mind. Sick as wordplay is I don't say so myself. Had some filers in there, but overal he took this battle. He had the four leaf clover joint...abit old but is always a good punch.

Optimized had some OK punches. Nothin that really stuck out. Some were kinda played like that tackle one. You should have stopped and thought about makin it abit better before you posted it. But keep it up. Shackles structure was good too.

This was feedback posted for ShackleS
 

decent battle but some of ya lines aint flow good niether did opt punches i think was tie, but u droped better befor and this one looks like it might come down to the very last vote....

Voted For: ShackleS

u had sum good shit mayn i pick this nigga cuzz he just killed it

Voted For: ShackleS

Vote: Shackles

Lyrics: Shackles
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Shackles
Structure: optimized
Punches: Shackles
Personals: Shackles

Overall: this battle werent a battle it was a straight up KO

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Voted For: ShackleS

Aight, Nice Battle...

SHACKLES Ya Hit Harder With Your Punches An U Had Better Structre
Could Use Ya Words A Lil Better But 6/10

Optimized, I Seen U Post Alot Better In My Opinnon...

Wasnt Ever Feelin Ya Melody Or Punches..
Keep Elevatin n Learnin From Your Mistakes

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Voted For: ShackleS

shackles cuz he had more wordplay and had better flow but you both had wack flow if you kno wut i mean... punchlines hmm weak for both...
optimize i didnt think your shit was good or even a little...
v/shackles cuz more wordplay i guess...