Why ask for feed back when no one will reply any way?
 

Fuck it why post with amitures any way,,,im out 1
NO replys no feed back,,, :nono:

Here are the links I replied to right here,,so where is the returned love?

RapVerse.com Community - freestyle(multimadness) Fukin HOT!!!!

RapVerse.com Community - Kiss My Ass Fresstyle Part 2 (Influenced By Blow It Out Ya Ass)

RapVerse.com Community - sHooTout

RapVerse.com Community - Just an advanced warning......

RapVerse.com Community - Merkin Academy (GangstarShit Diss)

All of these were done to day,,,1

stretched lines... work on that,

That Was Niiiiice Man...
Nice Vocab n Wordplay...

Ya Could Improve On Ya Structure A Little My Nigguh...
But Other Than That It Was FIYAH...Tight Drop...
Keep Em Comin..

P E A C E

yeah ur struc. is a little off... shorten ur lines a little brah.

nice drop dawg keep spittin
like da dlow da meanin good shit

the reason for the lines being stretched is when you read it thats how I spit
Theres really no room for alot of pauses,,because when I battle people face to face its the same way,,,why dont you tell me what you liked about the flow
Because I know for a fact it cant get know realer then what i just said
All that shit i spit is the truth,,an the truth will be all that remains in the end
but thank for the feed back

An shottaboy,,,,thats my brand new structure,,you can ask any one on this site,,,I keep changing my structure,,but to keep it real,,people are always going to question you're strucure no mater what you do,,none of us can really please one another completetly in life,,,so it really dont matter
But if you couldn't read or understand it then it would be a structure issue,,but i know you can read an understand it,,because you didnt complain about not understanding it
but thanks for the feed back...the truth will be all that remain,,no mater what happens
God bless all 1

yo foreal to antbody who read dis dont worry about scorin it 1 to 10 cuz dat dont even matter he cam to say da truth so he deserves 100% respect so fuk the scores and what needs to be improved cuz he already told me dis was his last peace.....it was some good shyt best eva good luvk in life `1`

stretched lines.. thats his only problem he works on that it would have been a SICK drop

putting a bitch straight!
 

Look dog you must didn't read what i said,,I'll have to show you again,,
I can since a little ~cough~,,bull shit in your voice!
:cussing:
Thats my brand new structure,,you can ask any one on this site,,,
I keep changing my structure,,but to keep it real,,
people are always going to question you're strucure no mater what you do,,
None of us can really please one another completetly in life,,,
So it really dont matter!
But if you couldn't read or understand it then it would be a structure issue,,
but i know you can read an understand it,,because you didnt complain about not understanding it
So you never said you liked the drop at all
an this is your 3rd time in my thread,,,,hhmmmm?
Now I wonder who you think you're talking too,,?
Dog I been in this thing all my life
So what is this your so called class on telling me my structure caused it to be wack?
If thats the case I know daum well you sound more like you liking it,,
But your pride want let you reduce your self to show true love towards any one elses work.
Because theres only one of me,,,just like theres only one of you,,,
So what can you teach me that none of us on this site dont know already,,?
If you can do that ,then i'll listen to your corny ass opinion!
The open mic means to say what you like and you dont like on any ones post
So if your not doing that take your no love having ,wish you could rap ,,to jelous to be real ass out of my mutha fucking thread ass hole!!!
If you dont explain I ain't trying to here it ,,,
what are you gona do post on me now,,,,pfff,,LMFAO...LOL
So you pissd off now,,,,,dog save your self the time,,,because it wouldnt be worth it
:gfy:
heres a quote from my so called wack flow,because I dont think you read it at all

Now read an understand like i said in the begaining ass hole!!


I write long,,but I make since in all of my songs.
So go ahead an suggest that yall dont want to read it all..!
It want hurt my feelings,,cause every thing I spit is the truth.
So save your applause,,cause I ain't trying to spit it for you!
Soon as I walked out of the booth,
I put my ear phones on the table,,because I already knew I was fully capable
An I ain't repping west coast,,or no other set,,like Teddy Pendergrass
Im thinking, Yall better let it go,,
When honestly im spitting the facts,,so i'll say this
The only way the truth can hurt you, is not facing it !
:thumbup:


Like i said the truth will be all that remains
So fuck off or go write your pissed off battle on me or something,,,PFF,,,LMFAO
Dont bring your corny ass back,,,unless you can teach me something this whole site ain't never seen bitch!!!!,,,the truth hurts dont it,,,so face it an save your self the pain,,bitch :shocked: Now pick your face!!

Feed back wouldn't hurt any one

daum I guess yall dont read much,,
Daum should i write 2 lines instead of what I feel
because 2 lines seems to be the only thing people respond to around here.
I guess being advanced in writting want get any replys from any one,,unless its 2 lines
Im glad this was my last time ever writting any thing on here because people dont read the truth any way...bye got daumit!!!

Im done with this asking for reply thing If you want me to read yours
Then read minds,,,But I guess its a little to late for that one,,,
Im out of here,,,theres only a few good souls here,,,,An I want to thank you insane16 for being such a good friend,,,we might have had our ups an down,,but God saw us through it all,,,
An I just want you to know your always going to be my hommie no matter what,,,I'll holla at you hommie aight stay up player,,,,but thank you to all those who did give me a reply,,,
God bless you all

yo lets get some more feed back for my boy 5mic...................