Uppin 4 voterz, what tha fuck

Dub's verse

i can rip a body built vortex...into a robitic antarex... and guess what, (what) ur nex...killing u with translated typed text...
{ Dogs nice fuckin rhyme scheme vocab was on point this is a hot bar right here }

and ur autopsy pics gone be on da net, but just ur spinal cord/
{ nice lil personal}

u spitting like u a legendary pac...u couldnt get a sign, if u stacked 3 mil on ur under-ground album dropp
{nice lil personal}

...
gay pals....bust open ur ass-crack and leave'ya broke with no stylez...send'ya back to ur click with a coke but no smile...
{decent personal}

...how many shells u get all depends on da numbers i rolls on da dice......
and i'm telling u man, da digits dont look nice/
{think u could of ended this more effectivly but i like the begining of this punch}


B.Styles' verse

-dub you gettin downed quick like twenty dollar extacy pillz/
Ya gotta mil stylez, well outta twenty mil I emerged wit tha ill

{Nice intro}

Face it your stylez only raw when bitten, an you bring raw steal
{ nice fukkin punch there broke i felt that 1...had to really read over to get it}

Young Desperado's? ya sound like a flamin click of travlin slutz
{hahaha nice personal}

Drop knowlege on broke? You so easy to find cause you sit at home an stroke
{ decent personal}



nice fuckkin battle ya'll i actually enjoyed voting for this
but only one will remain victorious
and my vote goes to E-Dub
i felt the multi and the flow and the personalswere thought out better
Broke that verse was defintly tight but you lost me in a couple of bar here and there
thats why my vote is E-Dub

broken stylz
 

some times people jus say anything that sounds intellectual.
DUB:
"i can rip a body built vortex...into a robitic antarex"
maybe I'm not a rocket scientist. BUT I thought this wz HIP HOP. i didn't feel this vs.till the end.

BROK:
"E-dub you gettin downed quick like twenty dollar extacy pillz/
Ya gotta mil stylez, well outta twenty mil I emerged wit tha ill/"
"Young Desperado's? ya sound like a flamin click of travlin slutz/
Like bitches drinkin around me I'ma make you spill ya gutz/"

GOOD LINE BROK
VOTE = BROKE

dub got it
 

gotta says dubs flow was more creative but brokes punches were harder and he had more punches, so in a battle who ever does the most damage wins.
vote=broke

ya vote dont count cuz u a fresh newbie....

2-4

uppin

rookie?
 

Yeh I'ma rookie on this site but i will smoke you in a battle, i ain't hatin but you ain't shit, battle me on here, we see what's up

look dawg i dont wanna ko you but m chiling high and aint gonna miss da oppurtinity to rip a dude when i'm bent cuz aint do it in awhile, so post it and spit first pussy..

2 reasons why ur vote dont count

1. u a fresh virgin blood newbie
2. how u gonna say i got dis 1, and den turn around
and says broke gott-it cuz he did much damage, wtf?

2-4

stop sleepin ya'll and vote!!

when i said he got it, i meant he got my vote, but you ain't countin my vote cuz i'm new, that's cool, cuz he gone win anyway, but i recognized i think you need to open your eyes son

Uppin 4 1 more vote 4-2
 

Ha ha ha dallas, 1 battle sayin you smoke dub, an what happens, you get koed, ha
Uppin 4 another vote or two...

uppin,
I really didnt want this as three pages....