Merkin Academy (GangstarShit Diss)
 

Man, This Nigguh Gon' Make Me Do This Again..

....Man Fuck This Nigguh.....

*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^

This Fagg DickRides So Much Everday Ya Wake Up With A Man NEXT-TO-YOU..
...I'ma Give U Ya Wish n Cut Ya Dick Off So Hey...Now Your A TRANSEXUAL..!

U Got A Scholarship InTo The MERKIN ACADEMY..
After I'm DoNE Rippin You LYRICALLY, I'ma Have My Boys Ready n Waitin To ''BLASPHEMY''

Man, I'm Fresh To 'Death' Fuck Lyrics I'ma Teach U Sign LANGUAGE........Cause U So Emotional The Middle Finger Does Enuff DAMAGE...

You Silly 'Gangster'....Only Thang You Pull Is Your DICK..
U Got A Sexual Relationship Wit Your Hand Trynna Pass It Off As Yo' TRICK..
U Couldnt Get Pussy From A Nymph With No Teeth Thats Been Decleared A LUNATIC..
My Rhyme'll Leave U 'Clueless' Like A Dyslesic Kid Trynna Do ARITHMETIC..

Man, I Dont Think U Even Own A Gun Or Got Any Homies, So Before U Call Yourself A GANGSTAR, Do The RESEARCH...
...This Diss Proves Your My Bitch n It Was Confirmed When U Said ''MASTER U RANG''...Like Lurch..
When I'm Done Wit'chu, Only Place U Gon' Be Accepted Is CHURCH...

This Is A BattleSite Not A CockBar U Homo......
...U Faggot, Its Time U 'BOUNCE' Like A Fuckin LoLo...



*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^


Who Knows What Gon Happen On The Second Verse...
I'm Spittin This From The Dome When It Took U Like 3 Days To REHEARSE..

Lil Chickenshit, U More 'YELLA' Than A Lakers Jersey...
Get Up Off Yo Knees Bitch n Stop Beggin For-Mercy..
...I Bring Nothin But Controversy..

...An Ya'll Better Hide Yo Rhymes Cause This Fake Gangstar Will Prolly ROBB-THEM....
U Shouldda Never Have Called My Name Cause I'm More Than Juss A PROBLEM...

Man, All I Know Is Your Mommas Pussy Infested Wit More 'CRABS' Than A Crips GROUPIE..
I'ma Be All Up On U Like A Rash n To Move Me U Best SHOOT-ME..

I'm So Sick I Thought After Watchin Me Diss U So Much U Wouldda Caught Some Style Like A DISEASE..
...Guess It Wasnt To Be, But That Still Dont Mean U Have To Scream Like ''O SOMEBODY HELP ME, PLEASE!!''

U Made This Personal..
I Couldda Been Like Whatever Instead Of Emotionally Hurtin-you..

Man, U Messin With A VIOLENT-TYPE..
I'ma Leave U More 'HOLY' Than The 'SILENT-NIGHT'...

I Got Punch 4 Weeks n The Only Thang U Serve Is The Non Alcholic LIQOUR..
If U Diss Me, U Get It Rite Back But Much Worse NIGGA..
Whatever The Fuck U Bring I Bring It Too But Only 10 Times BIGGER..!!!

*Welcome To The Merkin Academy...
....This Aint No Game So Stop Trynna Play-me....
...I Murder Wanksters Like You DAILY..
..I Got Rhymes, Six Nines An I'm UNTOUCHABLE..
...Stop Bendin Over U Bitch n Nigguhz Will Stop FUCKIN-YOU..!*
Chorus ^^


............How Many Times I Gotta Do This?
Damn, I Had My Fun Nah This Nigguh Borin Me...
Fake Ass GANGSTAR Trynna Be Sumthin He Aint..

Fuck This Gay Phoney..I'm OUT...
............................................P E A C E :shoot:

aight quit text,learn how ta construct good personal punches n go do audio...
thats my advice to you cause ya had so many forced rhymes in there...
might get away with it in audio but not text......

Well, There Wasnt An UNFORCED Rhyme In There...

You Need'a HOP Up Off Me Cause Everythin I Drop U Got Sumthan Bad To Say About It...

So If U Got A Problem Quit Bein A Bitch n HOLLA..

Remember when i win u'll be needin to goto merkin academy lol what a fool he makes an open mic like this to me when we have an open mic wit a name like this!

Obviously not much thought went into this...oh well

what the hell?

man shut the hell up n quit talkin bullshit

your heads so far up ya ass u spittin bullshit....

now shut the fuck up n stop makin up senseless garbage that nobody cares about...

When i win ur goin to merkin academy aight 5-0 on it's way ha ha u betta start askin sum peeps wit over 200 posts coz ur lil d/r clique aint gonn help ya now!

I Aint Even In A Clique.......
An FUCK That Battle, To Be Honest I Thought That Was Over A While Ago, Cough*Cause of u dick ridin......

But Yo, I Merked U With This Diss Thats Why Your Bringin Up The Battle...

Nigguh Be Gone..

I Aint Got Time 4 Dick Ridin' Bitches....
.............................P E A C E

i don't always say bad shit.....here....next to you/transexual...???? forced n doesnt work............launguage/damage..forced aint working.....
thats why i said quit text n try audio....openmic is to be critiqued not ta have noobs n vets all over your dick, sayin ahh man that shit was hot...any1 can say that shit,its pickin out wats wrong with ya verse n speakin on it...most peeps don't like doin that,if you don't like wat i say don't post in openmic...simple as that n im not hatin or pickin sides so don't get it twisted kid.....lean the fuck back n if you reply with some beef shit your gonna have problems....if not we koo n jus drop the issue...other than wat i pointed out it had decent flow....

No F'Real, U ALWAYS Got Sumthin Bad To Say About People...

An THIS AINT Beef, I Know U Aint No Dickryder, An I Only Got Hate 4 Dickryders Like This Dumb Fuck Gangstarshit....

in my eyes telling people wat there doin right is'nt a way of helping them,
tell them wat there doin wrong n they'll focus on that rather than them focusing on wat there doin right which doesnt need improvment......

see if i wouldve said your vocabs good n your structure aight...

guarenteed you'd be focusin on your rhymes n lines which in reality arent the pieces that need work.....bring wats wrong to a persons attention n it'll stick with em....
prays them n they'll jus get a big head..........philosophy 101

I see you had some pretty good disses in it though,,,
So i'll give you a 7 out of ten,,,
but who am i to say i guess its really up to you to believe what it is,,
Always believe in your self no mater what,,,nice drop,,,,1


feed back wouldn't hurt any one,,,
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764

this wasnt very good.. work on structure.. peace..