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HOLLOW_TIPS vs CFAstunna1
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting may tha best nigga win :shoot: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 03:27 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
HOLLOW_TIPS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:27 PM.
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CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 03:32 PM.
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yo u couldnt win againts me if u knew what i was SAYIN/u think its a fuckin GAME? well u tha only nigga PLAYIN/once tha i smell BEEF thats wen my tech's start SPRAYIN/
wen im done wit u there gonna be aksin "what hapen to that boy" like burdman and clipse/u wanna take it to war? imma start releasn clips/u that nigga workin tha corner ridin dicks/ like pitch black said "uthink u spittin GAME but tha GAME spit u out/niggas out hear know what im about/im about to put this niggas lights out/l like a light switch/ill run this nigga down wit a fuel truck like stich/i came at u wit these rhymes in back that computer nigga prolli flintched/ niggas in tha penitentary/get scared wen they mention me/cuz if i see uhm in jail they dead/ya hurd what i said?/let tha word spread/if u see a dot thats red/watch out cuzz u could be in tha hospital bed/ this nigga keep rappin about how he pack heat/but he couldnt pack heat/if he came from hell/ill let my tech spray so it will ring a bell/u a bitch made ya chick pick u up cuzz u fell/ yo destiny is to die nigga im wild/u just a lil man slow down child/(destinys child)/dont smile nigga this aint funny/ull get DROPPED after one SHOT keep my waist HOT and ill snatch ya muney/fuckin lil dummy u couldnt have GAME if ya NAME was GAME/u aint no stunna/ ill light u up so u hotter then summa/im hungry can u feel my hunga?/i got things to do nigga like fuckin ya bitch in my humma |
ayo i been chillen in the cut gettin bored az hell waitin for this brick to come thru the mail and then im gonna sit on my ass and count my papers while i get money and u catch the vapors i got a sixth sence for detectin bitch ass niggas and then i handle their ass wit the glock 9 trigga i put hoes on blocks so they can sell ass and rocks and then i get em to my car so they can suk my cock then i look at my rolex bezel thats a portable clock and since im a smart nigga i go to wall street to look at my stock u just eat sleep and shit while i scoop up and mouth fuk ur bitch i just b chillen waitin for action ur the openin act while im the main attraction
CFA MOTHAFUKA |
uppin for votes niggas come vote yall
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cancel that we gone redue this battle let this one out
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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
TIPS - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... /10 CFA- Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 3/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for HOLLOW_TIPS
you took this one hollow but since you in da crew feedback...
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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
aiight battle first off cf gotta work on hi structre and flow cuz that was the hardest verse i ve had to read. no dis just line up ya lines and you'll have a better verse. hollow dct verse but in a couple lines u squeezed 3 in an it aint flow. punches werent hard but i felt the hunger in ya verse..last line was lackluster yet better than cf closer was wack ya whole verse sound like u wa talking on the phone and tips verse sound like an argument in the hood but overall that was better to read |
Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
hollow won dis 1 he had better punches better personal bettr verse all together hollow winsa hands down plz return tha fav battles in sig |
Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
Aight HOLLOW Got This... Stunna ya structure was everywhere, i couldnt read nuthin or find where the rhyme was, so u automatically lose (no hate just present ya rhymes better) Hollow, ya flow............aight, ya need'a have more creativity in ya flow, but on the whole, u had the better structured, more senisble verse, so u got my vote return the fave in my sig p e a c e |
Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS
stunna had bad structure hollow had good puches and an iight struture hollow gets my vote cause of his punches |
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