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Paramik vs Shottaboy
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting you check in first Minimum posts to vote: 500 Check in by: 09-06-04 at 09:06 PM Must drop verse in 50 minutes after check in. |
sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:07 PM.
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Paramik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:35 PM.
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Dogg Look At Ya Avatar, No Need To Self Harm Cause I Beat-You...
I Think U Chokin Homie, Somebody Call 9-1-1...This Is An EMERGENCY RESCUE...!! I See Ya Battle Record n Respects-Due... But What Hot Emcees U Faced Besides Me Dude?... You's A 'VET' That Means I'ma Smack The Shit Out YOU Juss Cause Of Ya ATTITUDE... You Bitch U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD.. I Dont Know Where The Fuck U Got The Name PARAMIK.. All I Know Is Everytime I Post Sumthin On Here U Ridin My Diiiick..! My ''Dome'' Stays On Ya Mommas Mouth Like A Model Wearin LIPSTICK.. ...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker! Explanations... U Claim U Throwin Up 'RAGS' Well That'll Explain The Shitty MOOD..(Rags = Tampon = Periods = Bein In A MOOD) ...Ya Rhymes Comin Up Shorter Than An Oompa Loompa So I'ma Paint U Orange n Call U NICK...!!.....Muh'Fucker!..(Oompa Loompas Are Orange An NICK Because Of NICKELODEON) |
Get blown away by Frances, this mother fucker has no chance…
Cause his lines already garbage bagged up, just like his pants. I agree he makes an ass out of himself his weight makes him fall… Kid says that his lines are fully assed?, must not have any at all. I mean your wack, ya punches and structure is like dog shit in a pile… Your crap redefined, ya verse more messed up than ludas hairstyle…. I'm whipping this class clown, like what they used to do at his school… It’s just like the days before Lent, the way I'm Passing OVER this fool! What a weak punk, even the pussy cats not afraid of what you do. Learn the truth, nobody fears you, even my cat flips the finger at you. |
ok done let people vote now
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Aight, I'm STILL At School 4 One.....
An TWO...Nice Verse, U Obviously Had Ideas About Whut U Was Gonna Say 2 Me Before We Even Accepted This Battle... But Nice Verse n Upppppin 4 Votes...!!! |
Uppppin Ya'll...!!!
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Upppppppin Ya'll.............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Uopping in this shit
votign niggas or is the post count to high??? |
I Think The Post Count Too High?????
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Voted For: Paramik
this was a decent battle but still one-sided... flow: para punches: para creativeness: para vote: para he just had a better flow more hits that was harder and more creative point blank but no hate.... decent battle |
This was feedback posted for Paramik
cute fuckin finisher ngga
let me know when u want it.... |
Vote please
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aight props to both battlers here. but here's the verdict.
flow:paramik structure:paramik vocab:paramik punches:paramik Seriousness:paramik best line:paramik "...It's like the days, before lent the way i'm passing over this fool." worst line:"...ya rhymes comin up shorter than an oompa loompa, so i'ma paint you orange and call you nick." why:shotta your structure needed a lot of work, i found myself confused at first and this is never good. Some stuff didn't sound right together and things like that. and overall this verse just lacked creativity and seriousness, the nickelodeon reference, was bad and well chidish. But in truth paramik was only slightly better, but you guys were all well in the same boat. but paramik had better structure. |
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