Freestyle Diss
 

Freestyle Diss

Dont diss me in cypher
You not mad, just hyper
You dont wanna start shit
And dont think Im gonna let you lick up on my tit
I wont lick yo dick
I wont suck yo dick
Its sour and soggy like a pickle
You tryen to sell beats - They worth less than a nickle
So back off - You just tryen to elavate
Yo pussy get yo ass beat so dont hate
Think your a good textcee
You obviously neva met me!
Now you know Dime
And you know her ill rhyme.


My second spit ever. Got a little better but over all I know its kinda off in flow.


My Link:
Open Mic By: Keen2B
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147159

no the flows pretty good but you sound like yer a herb and that is what you are lol

lol u fukin sux lol just keep practicin ya rhymes n battles... n maybe u could check out da tutorials lol coz u need it!!!!

Yea, That Wasnt The Best Peice I Seen...

An WHO Are You Dissin?

Dissin Random People Like That Is Garbage Man...

Have More Meanin To Ya Rhymes..
An ADD Punches An Make Them Humouress...

U Need ELEVATION, An ALOT Of It..

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