HOLLOW_TIPS vs CFASTUNNA1
 

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HOLLOW_TIPS has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:49 PM.

yo u couldnt win againts me if u knew what i was SAYIN/u think its a fuckin GAME? well u tha only nigga PLAYIN/once tha i smell BEEF thats wen my tech's start SPRAYIN/

wen im done wit u there gonna be aksin "what hapen to that boy" like burdman and clipse/u wanna take it to war? imma start releasn clips/u that nigga workin tha corner ridin dicks/

like pitch black said "uthink u spittin GAME but tha GAME spit u out/niggas out hear know what im about/im about to put this niggas lights out/l

like a light switch/ill run this nigga down wit a fuel truck like stich/i came at u wit these rhymes in back that computer nigga prolli flintched/

niggas in tha penitentary/get scared wen they mention me/cuz if i see uhm in jail they dead/ya hurd what i said?/let tha word spread/if u see a dot thats red/watch out cuzz u could be in tha hospital bed/

this nigga keep rappin about how he pack heat/but he couldnt pack heat/if he came from hell/ill let my tech spray so it will ring a bell/u a bitch made ya chick pick u up cuzz u fell/

yo destiny is to die nigga im wild/u just a lil man slow down child/(destinys child)/dont smile nigga this aint funny/ull get DROPPED after one SHOT keep my waist HOT and ill snatch ya muney/fuckin lil dummy

u couldnt have GAME if ya NAME was GAME/u aint no stunna/ ill light u up so u hotter then summa/im hungry can u feel my hunga?/i got things to do nigga like fuckin ya bitch in my humma

CFAstunna1 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 06:53 PM.

ur girls sucks so much dic she needs a new dentist ur rymes are recycled like plastic from an environmentalist u aint shit but a slak u might b blak and blue but fuk wit me id have ur shirt lookin red and blak but mainly red mainly cuz u let the berretta hollo points go strait thru ur head u in a casket exept a hospital bed all cuz u wanted to fuk wit a nigga and his gun lead i put hoes on blocks one of them bein ur girl she got the good head and she will rock ur world her pussy blown bak fukin 12 not too many niggaz she let all hang out like a bolegged wigga if u think rappin like that gonna get u somewhere u betta stop before u start cuz im already 1 at the top of the killanigga chart

aye yall vote up on this battle aiight then lookin for votes

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

You got this...structure was there...punches was better. Stunna your structure needs work. That paragraph stuff is kinda hard to read. As it's all bunched up...and hard to tell weither or not wat words ur rhymin. But you had ideads and some ok vocab. Structure is really the only thing u need to work on. Hollow your elevating from da last battle I seen u in.

Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

i got ta say dis boy got it he had betta structure and all dem he had more disses wit da name and he was nice wit it

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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

letz see
Flow - Hollow
Punchez - Hollow
Vocab - CFast

gotta give it 2 hollow 2 outta 3 winz

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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

dang... not hard vote. Hollow u were better overall. structure hollow, punches- hollow, wordplay- hollow, basically everything hollow. stunna give it some structure man, u had weak punches, and no commas at all, no help for us. hollow your punches were moderate. some were hard, "yo u couldnt win againts me if u knew what i was SAYIN/u think its a fuckin GAME? well u tha only nigga PLAYIN" haha that wuz nice. one i didnt like wuz "u couldnt have GAME if ya NAME was GAME/u aint no stunna/ ill light u up so u hotter then summa/im hungry can u feel my hunga?/i got things to do nigga like fuckin ya bitch in my humma" that wuz kinda weak. not bad but u got better. stunna your flow wuz off a bit too. "if u think rappin like that gonna get u somewhere u betta stop before u start cuz im already 1 at the top of the killanigga chart" not bad. give it structure and u may have pulled it off. peace

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Voted For: HOLLOW_TIPS

both verses need some serious elevation... especially that stunna dude!... stunna, ya whole structure is jacked up... what's supposed to rhyme? both had terrible wordplay and no real punches... hollow at least had a better structure but he needs to fix his shyt too... rhymes were elementary for both...do you read at all? sheesh... that shyt is fundamental... emphasis on the mental part!... this goes to hallow for better structure...everything else sucked