Domino04 vs Xponant
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Domino vs. Xponant. Domino is goin first. Enjoy the battle. peace

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-06-04 at 08:03 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Xponant has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:05 PM.

Domino04 has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:11 PM.

yo look im new hear but dont let that mean its gon' be easy,
cuz for me this shit is a breeze and u cant beat me,
your words wont effect me cuz its all bullshit,
its like killin' me in my sleep bitch i dont feel it,
and imma put a wound in ur soul wit my words so bad u cant heal it,
now u can try to win but wont pull it,
victory was jus stolen outta ur grasp,
i walk right up to yo house in all black wit a mask and rob u and take all ur stash,
i forgot u dont have one ur broke as shit u live in trash,
and u wanna have a drink on tha house but i put ebloa in it and now u gonna bleed out and crash,
yo u got lucky i have to go for now but ill be bak bitch,
and jus wait till im rich

Time to Rhyme founder rappin against a newb,
hes like a smoker, he wouldnt start if he only knew
He imed me hopin to be in tha crew.
Ive listned to you and i kno u aint wit dis
for these peoples sake pleaz plead da fifth,
To beat u one line is all I really need,
while your are slowin down im gainin speed.
I have 2 minutes to drop this verse
screw bein nice im ready to curse.
fucker im sick of people wanting help in their lines
u ever think that i just dont have time?
finisher do in 2,
u just got beat by red white and blue (my avatar)

peace

aight thats it. i wish i had had more time. o well. uppin**************** peace

Voted For: Xponant

damn...this was hard to vote. Both verses didn't bring much. Need more punches. And some wordplay. I only gave u this vote cause your structure was better. But you need some punches or somethin to make your verse better. You got da structure down pack no work on the punches and wordplay and shit. Dom you had no punches at all. I think I saw one, but that was it. You gotta work on your structure and change it around or somethin. Try to make da lines equal. Keep it up you'll get better. Your gettin there from what I see.

ya well i typed it in bout 4 minutes. so i mean i forgot that i checked in and the 20 min were tickin. peace

hello does anyone go on this site? VOTE. uppin************************

anyday now people. is it that hard? UPPIN********************************************* ********* peace

Voted For: Xponant

this was a little better but the other guy sucked this time but nun the less Xponant took it goodly <lol:
vocab:xponant
punches:xponant
metas: no one
multi's: xponant
opener:xponant
closener: domino
return the favour in any of my battle links in my sig thanks peace

Voted For: Domino04

Domino won diss
his flow was better shoulda used wordplay
vocab n metas etc. 2 help it out more but
ok

Xponant
ur structure was better but flow was wack
no punches no wordplay no metas no vocab
ur flow had nuttin 2 go on so keep elevatin
n u'll get better

vote on da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

Voted For: Domino04

dang weak battle xponant was really wack give it up dawg cause u aint hot and xplicit said it
opener:neither
structure:domino
punches:domino(both were weak but his was a little better)
humor:neither
overall:domino
vote:domino
battle could have been better but it wasnt

drop honest votes here
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140006
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140004

~one xplicit

Voted For: Xponant

X:
Okay After Reading This Battle I Decided X Came Harder His Vocaubluary Was Much More Decent...Just Try And Line Up The Lines Next Time Werrdd...And Use Harder Personals6.5/10 And I Know You Elivated Since Now

Domino:
Basic Rhymes Structure Was Weak Played Out Personals Nothing Really New Here Just A Weak Verse Up Your Shit Cozz Nuff Said....5/10

Voted For: Xponant

You started off with that hot punchline i like that this was easy to decide, return the favor and vote on my battle aginst NY's Finest. PLEASE BE HONEST.