shottaboy vs CataclyzM-i-C
 

Battle Rules:

6 Barz
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting



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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 12:03 AM

Must drop verse in 265 minutes after check in.

CataclyzM-i-C has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:39 PM.

sHoTTaBoY has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-06-04 07:42 PM.

Man The Only Thang ''Untouchable'' On You Is Ya COCK...
Wont Nobody Touch It Cause Of The 'HEAD-ROT'...

''S.T.D'z'' Is All U BRING...
Nigguh U Couldnt Throw A Decent 'Punch' Even If I Let U Have The First SWING..

Man Your Record Is One To NIL...
I'ma Change That By Killin U By Ya Own MIC (Ac)CORD n Tell The Cops It Was 'FREEWILL'...

He Got A Picture Of A Chick On His AVATAR...
Thats Juss To Hide The Fact Hes A Regular At The 'GAYBAR'...
Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR...
Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....

Only Thang 'POSITIVE' Bout This Kat Is The H.I.V...
I'd Think Befo' Ya Spit Cause I Can Make Ur Worst Enemy The 'M.I.C'..!!!

ayo time to rash on dis nigga....

ayo dis coward tryin see me, i think shotta lost his mind/
U cant flow, you skateboard n das da only way u stay on da grind
U got plenty of battles under ur waste, but u aint poppin off ya guns-lead/
look at ur record nigga, shotta's barely makin it over 500
When i called out this battle, you no u shudda refused/
my flow treats u like a pipe 2 a crackhead, ur fuckin abused
Its ridiculous, my rhymes are 2 sick to just-ify in brail/
u cudda spit a hard bar if you crashed into a muthafuckin safety rail
Got luda in ur avy pretendin rhymes come outa ya mouth/
only thing u say to Mc's is "write a verse 4 me n then i'll satisfy u down south"
ive heard better shyt from youngstaz dat play wit harry potter toyz/
every1 give you last respects, cuz i just shotta-boy


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Upppppppppppppppin 4 Votes Ya'll.....!!!

Nice Verse, Pimpin...

Good Luck On The Battle n Shit

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This was feedback posted for CataclyzM-i-C
 

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This was feedback posted for sHoTTaBoY
 

this is my crew partnah so...heres my feedback..
multis-shotta
punchez-cataclyzM-I-C
structure-sshotta
best line-*Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR...Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR...
Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....

Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....*
why?-I like tha Dick Stays On Your Lips Like Suge With A CUBAN CIGAR...
Only Time U Serve 'Punch' Is When U Workin Behind A BAR....line..that was cool.

overall vote if I could vote-shottaboy(thats why crews cant vote...2 biast..lol)

Voted For: sHoTTaBoY

I Give This One To Shotta
... Opener was Funny ...

Mic Ya Punches Were Pretty Simple ... Structure Was Ok But Flow Was Off In Parts ...;
look at ur record nigga, shotta's barely makin it over 500
When i called out this battle, you no u shudda refused/
my flow treats u like a pipe 2 a crackhead, ur fuckin abused
Ya First Line Here Was Stretched As Fuck ...

Shotta Was A Lil More Creative With His Punches ... Hiv Punch Is A lil Played Though ... Ya Structure Still Needs Work ... But Ya Got this Battle Purely On Punches ... If MIC Had Betta punches Then He Dropped Then He Would OF Won This Coz Ya Structure ...

Vote: Shottaboy

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Voted For: CataclyzM-i-C

damn........diz nigga iz got dis one.. tha punchez was fukkin doped... i couldnt get wat shottaboy was sayin.. well i knew wat Cata was sayin hiz shyt was clear n simple.. iight return tha favour http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=146777
thx PEEEEEECE

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