what on my mind
 

yo im the next elvis/throwing shot a ya pelvis/ im another whit kid doing black music/and im still just as gangster so don't abuse it/ cuz i wont hesitate to put a slug in ya/on't come runnin up unless you got thug in ya/ cuz i don't care if you don't like my flo and it bugin ya/now im gon release this info im ready to battle any one/ ill a rattle any one catch and sattle any one/ride you to victory im not well i got a sic story/ not afraid to do shit ill spit fire at you/ ya now my empire phat to/ would you say im crazy or am i insane/w ill i kill or stand outside in a hurricane/ when i gon wacko will i refrain led. and if i don't you dead aiight/ your biggest fear and if tha bed bugs bite now/ it if you should stop tha fight now.

Yo you doing your dizzle my nizzle,,welcome to the site,,,
practice makes perfect
but none of us are that so I guess it makes us good enough to do what we want,
I see you got heart an thats all any mc needs to grow,,so keep on pushing
nice work,,,stay consistant an you'll be all you ever wanted be


Heres a link to my drop feed back is viser verser

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764