shake-spear vs Empire
 

Battle Rules:

6 - Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Links
No Quotes

Crew Battle P.S.A vs Infinite

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 02:11 AM

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Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 12:27 AM.

shake-spear has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 12:32 AM.

Fuck structure dont say my shit is streched just rap it shit has a fucking dope flow-

Dont 'post for him' he get no votes no wins' fo real he dont even exist to me(a)
'Satistically' i'm who he 'wish to be' like broke cameras he could never picture me
Like broke 'slammers' and rusty broke 'hammers' he aint got a shot with his bars(1)
'Subjection'to viagra 'testing' on flacid 'errections' still this dick will never be hard(2)
Chances of a 'win' extremly 'slim' like european models on run ways
So 'wrong' but i been ''SUN'nning you so 'long' ya flow is on Monday(2)







EXPLANATIONS-
a)hes 10-1 but he never really posts and nobody votes on his shit so he dont even exist to me hes a nobody
1)we call guns hammers in new york and a slammer is a jail metaphore for shot and bars
2)hes the dick that can never be hard
3)'SUN'day comes before monday i been sunning him so long he moved up to het away from me

this is a P.ublic S.ervice A.nnouncement lol P.S.A wut was yall thinkin

empire,u aint got-skill, u like "knoxville" cause yous an "ass"/
battlein me u must be "bannanas" well ima "gorilla", do the math/

dis dude is losin-fast askin for the L (Liscence) like a bartender/
and u aint hard at all dogg all of ya bars-tender/

ya flows sloppy, punches asi-asi, if im wrong stop-me/
but if the sayins true and u are wut u eat no wonder ur so "cock"y/


iight not my best potential but only 6 lines wat can i say

nice verse son ...................................

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Voted For: Empire

goood personal .... punches came harder.... bit streched (made it difficult to read) but i felt you more... shake... spend more time on vocab and making potential good punches land harder with good vocab

This was feedback posted for shake-spear
 

just checkin shit out.....nice battle both of u

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Voted For: Empire

u got u want honesty u got it
7/10
his
4/10
upin for votes check ithttp://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148015

strobe is gonna dq all these votes if yall dont explain wayyyyyyyyyyy better than that why i won :laugh:

Voted For: Empire

Empire:
Everything was fire!! Structure, flow, punches were off the meat-rack!! And, it didn't hurt to explain yourself, either. Clearly, u came harder on this one.

Shake-spear:
U tried. Your flows were a little off, and your punchlines were out there. Structure was good. If you had better punches and came harder, u would have done better.

Empire gets my vote.

Voted For: shake-spear

both verses were well writtin but im gonna have to give this one to shake-spear.....empire them punches were wack i dunno what happened tp you this battle but u came with a played punches.....broke camera......the monday line was wack
the viagra line was also played...and for some reason i feel ive heard that verse somewhere.....but i cant proove it so none the less the bananas gorilla line was phat lol......i was feelin that shit....your other two bars were kinda played like empires....but u had the best bar of the battle.....so my vote goes to you for jus out-doin him......
Vote:Shake-Spear

thnx for the votes people ill return the favor when im on later lol empire well atleast it wasnt a K.O.