not produced yet but,,,
 

yo,this shit is HOTTT

gimi fedback good or bad...was bent wen i did this and ill produce tomorow but for now....hear the real me and about 3 mins of my life

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/1/c...miwangmusic.htm

top song "LIFE"

hmm.. The beat is fuckin sick, u flowed well on it, pretty good job!!

But! u sounded monotone, so put more emotion in to it, u feel me, i know it will be a hot song.

Not bad flow man, mos def needs to be cleaned up - but hey my quality aint that hot either. But flow was good, lyrics was nice, and beat selection was ill. Keep droppin and hope to hear this once its cleaned up.

return the feed:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148807

thx for the feeback

in the words of pac,this was some of tha realest shit i ever wrote...haha

my 1st non battle track,jus shit about me and were i was at,i'll drop seom feed on ya'll in a bit

U too close to the mic.............................overall aight could be produced betta........