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The Politician 09-07-04 12:50 AM

Black America(Peep Dis)
 
Talkin

White Man:hey, those niggers are still listin to there rap music and wat not
White Man 2:ha,ha, they will never learn, will they
White Man:ha, they have no idea wat were doing to them
White Man 2:ha,I bet they dont even vote
(BOOM)
The Politician:now whos talkin

Verse 1
yea,
Black america, they say we stupid and we stay in dey pocket
there killin us, only if we come together we can stop it/1

1924, were bein treated so pourley, they discriminate
80 years later, the Black race they still tryin to eliminate/2

if we try to make it on our own we still fail
they make the money, we payin for bail
walk down to Clinton only a couple whites in jail
they got the best lawyers, Cochran can't keep us all out of cells/3

its such a constant struggle to make in this world cause im dark
this hatred is to deep now, for so long its been manafested in ma heart
we the only ones wit aids dyin, people look at the charts/4

they gettin cures, im sorry to say we not gettin healed
they havin debates in buisness, while we gettin killied/5

but we killin our selves, it aint rite, we need to stop
think about it, we smokin "Weed" while they smokin government tested Pot/6

Hook
Black America
we gotta save our selves
Black America
If we dont do it no one else
Black America
will

Think about it
Compton, Chicago, Bronx, getto is all crew
Hamptons, San Fran, They sippin in Malibu/1

please vote and do wat it takes to make a desicion
Break out, post bail, fight, wat ever it takes to get outa prison/2

Hook(3x and end)

thats the song

VOTE YALL

Implicit 09-07-04 01:00 AM

that was pretty good but u shouldve expanded it a lil more. it was kinda short. i thnk if u lenghtened it more it wouldve been better but its still good

~Sonofisis~ 09-07-04 01:00 AM

"Cocrahn can't get us all out of jail"
I know that's what u meant, that was ill.. see, i like this piece because it actually matters, i'm black so i can relate in certain ways.. I don't care how far we've came, we still have a long way to go, ya feel me? But yo peice was very heart felt, nice flow, made a whole lot of sense.. some of the quotables was a clever way to get your point across.. keep it up man.. my only suggestion is to work on the wordplay, try to rhyme with more syllables n shit, but other wise this verse was tight, 1..

Hate chew 09-07-04 01:04 AM

this was a dope drop..but check out the thread in interaction called..."if your black check this" i gave a long explanation to my thoughts on this topic...but this was a good drop man ..keep them coming..
pz

The Politician 09-07-04 01:06 AM

thanx yall, it means alot comin from blacks

The Politician 09-07-04 01:57 AM

15 views and 3 replies, c'mon

Raptor 09-07-04 04:47 AM

LIKED IT BUT.. (& yo please don't be offended)
I think the intro has a fallacy in it(the whole 'white men' against blaks voting thing.) 'White men', and by white I'm sure u mean racist/bigotted ones, don't care if blaks, or any minority groups for that matter, vote. See the 'white men' u speak of created a contemptuos little invention, under the guise of preventing voting attrition by any single state, called the ELECTORAL COLLEGE. With this single institution, 'they' ensured that , no matter who 'WE THE PEOPLE' vote 4, only persons that meet their status quo (ideally a WASP) would ever get elected. (JFK did slip thru the cracks though, but we all know what happened to him.) [cont on next post]

Raptor 09-07-04 05:19 AM

What's my point? Only that Voting is not the answer for blacks. Instead, I believe that only thru widespread Mastery(meaning the Learning and Application) of the Principles of True Wealth (namely ownership of CAPITAL and the MEANS TO PRODUCE CAPITAL) ,by blaks as a whole-not just a few supposed exceptions, can blaks ever truly hope to ELEVATE AS A PEOPLE. This would probably have to be inacted at the family level (meaning Parent w/ their kids) for it to work, just like the pakistanis and koreans. Anywho I leave it 2 u 2 theorize on that further, and maybe that could be what the next 2 verses are about--HOW 2 FIX THIS SHIT, How blaks (or any minority group can Elevate as a Whole.) Anyway I went brittanica and shit nuff sed. 1

Young Philly 09-08-04 12:45 PM

DAMN GOOD MESSAGE! stay strong my brotha be strong i'm tellin you if corperate (white) heard that or read that! that would send a strong message back to any white home any where in the world! Unleash what you have to say and keep it real! Dats what's up! The Black House! yeah! One day my brotha one day!

Ice Pick 09-08-04 12:56 PM

THIS ISNT 4 hundred years ago

BILL COSBY SAID IT HIMSELF that Black people need to stop coming up with excuses

This peice is dumb

Stop having unprotected sex and the aids will stop
THERE IS NO CURE FOR AIDS SO WHAT FUCKIN CURE YOU TALKIN ABOUT

OH YEAH WE SMOKIN GOVERNEMNT TESTED POT
YEAH CANCER PATIENTS SMOKE THAT

I SMOKE THE REAL SHIT


WHITE S AND BLACKS EXIST IN PEACE NOW A DAYS

IF BLACK PEOPLE WANNA STAY OUT OF JAIL
STOP SELLING CRACK AND KILLING EACHOTHER


If you want i could make an equally disgusting peice about
WHITE AMERICA and what we could think

I THINK THIS POST WAS BULLSHIT

still dwelling on the fuckin past, were you alive then ,,,, NO

PEOPLE HAVE CHANGED THEIR WAYS YOU TWIT

20 years old and you think you have a cLUE TO WHAT IS REALLY HAPPENING\

I beleive its called reverse rasism, EIETHER WAY THIS PEICE SUCKED

HAVE A BAD DAY

sinn 09-08-04 01:40 PM

damn yo, if some white dood made some shit like that, everyone would be like BOOOOOO, fuckin racist, yea theres racist white people, yea there racist black people, but u make the shit sound like fuckin every white dood is racist, or every white dood is rich, thas like me sayin ALL black people are poor, i bet muhfuckas wouldent b happy wit that shit, CUZ ITS NOT TRU, and that shit bout only black doods in jail? damn really last time i checked my cuzin is in prison and hes white....o but i guess he couldent get a good lawyer either...... so all i got to say bout this is... = /

Acuity 09-08-04 02:25 PM

Yo ppl r fuckin wit dis brotha 4 da wrong reasons....
It isnt 400years ago we know dat he knows dat but the fact of the matta is sum of dat shit still goes on and every black man or ethnic minority race anywher knows that. He aint sayin every white person is racist or tryin to imply but u hav 2 understand dat shit black ppl go through isnt neccesarily experienced by white people. If ur a white person in tha hood den dnt lie u shud b able to c wat goes on. If u dnt understand ne of y'all ur jus bein damn nieve...watch a film like boyz n tha hood, ice cube sayz it betta than i cud explain
"eitha they dnt know
they dnt wanna know
or they jus dnt giv a fuk bout tha hood" black ppl die evry day in th hood u aint hear shit, white 17yr old dies in ur lil suburb its national tv.

I baliev dat is a sensitive subject and a gd ting 2 rhyme bout, but y'll gotsta c wen rhyming bout tingz like dat prejudices and stereotypes of all races are gonna come up

Ice Pick 09-08-04 02:36 PM

LEARN HOW TO SPEEL
I DONT TAKE ADVICE FROM RETARDS

WHAT YOU SAID WAS SO JIBBERISH ITS NOT FUNNY.......


THIS PEICE SUCKED AND WHITE PEOPLE ARE MORE THE MINORITY NOW A DAYS

SO BOO HOO TOO YU

so take DIS AND SHUV IT UP DAT AZZ

The Politician 09-08-04 04:22 PM

DAMN, im glad ppl are respondin but jus cause ppl are disagrrein wit me dont mean ima hate, i agree wit everyone but fo' real tho

DIS WAS ONLY TO BLACK PPL SO WHITES I AM A RACIST!!!!!!!!!!!

sinn 09-08-04 08:14 PM

yo well all i got to say is FUCK U faggot ass bitch


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