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keen2b vs illuson
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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 05:44 AM.
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keen2B has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 05:45 AM.
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right now im under no ILLUSON.
i thought my record was bad but its clear u need a brain TRANSFUSION. u need to give up now to end all CONFUSSION. ur record is quite AMUSION by now ur used to LOSSE'n il take this battle to end my own record ABUSIO'N. you've lost nine because of ur infior RYMHE. iv lost mine because im drunk all the TIME. i come at wak rappers wit a tipsy LINE. im ok now and im ready to SHINE. il LIGHT up ur ass wit my my left over alcholic 9% WINE. no need for u to WHINE ok it will b a little SORE but its better than being washed up dead on a SHORE NINE miles from civilisation NINE dagger wounds found in ur HEAD NINE's ur unlucky number like a cat after NINE lines you'll Be DEAD |
i only know you as phony
fight me like ya told me we'll never be homie i'm gonna beat ya all by my lonley self i dont need no help try to expose me ya way to nozey stay out of my shit this so called g gonna hit him self dont fuck with me cause ya aint m.c im far from whack got all these all ove my sack keen 2 b got queers gets his gear half price at sears bang bang all this bitch'll hear we gonna go face to face throw ya down a stair case give ya some head spacedie mother fucker ya fuckin dick sucker ive elavted its been stated im blessin the mic no m.cs insight im gonna sho yall who keen2b is not what he seen2b drop the mic ya don b ya cant see me how yall like me now |
up'in for votes
get at me look'in for the win peace.. :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: :shoot: |
ya can be lookin all ya want dont mean yall get it
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Voted For: keen2B
ok no good punches or disses vocab was better for keen as well as flow and structure so he wins on the only things i can vote on |
Voted For: keen2B
Aight.... Not The Strongest Battle In The World.. KEEN You Got The Vote, Ya Personals Hit Harder, Ya Vocab Was Okay, But You Need'a Step Ya Game Up, Add Humour To Ya Punches, Try Usin Your Words Better Too....But Okay Drop 5/10.... illuson....Ya Rhyme Seem'd Kinda Elementary (No Disrespect) You Need'a Up Your Vocab An Your Punches, But Nice Structure An Some Okay Wordplay On There... Both Need To Elevate.... KEEN Gets My Vote Return The Favor n Vote On My Battles P E A C E |
shoutout boy i got ur back
cos u got mine il continue to elevate my inferior rymhe peace |
Voted For: keen2B
nice lines... punchlines are good "like a cat after NINE lines you'll Be DEAD" nice use of word play... not bad for a drunk i give you this vote on structure alone i would like to here it spoken... the flow is quite understandable |
ya thanxs tanto looken for the first win u no
like i said im sober today though ha |
Voted For: keen2B
WACK BATTLE keen2 Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... illuson Punches were good too not as hard as keen2B's tho... Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
Voted For: keen2B
yo weak battle yall illuson- not much puches bad sturture that was wack keen2b- good puches ok sturture overall- keen2b return da favour http://community.rapverse.com/showb...576268&posted=1 |
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