thoughts on ya death bed
 

just some quick shit i did for the cypher.....


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i see the light is it time for that yet
hope im forgivin for all the times i blast tecks
hope i havent wasted the time now that im faced with demize
ive got no places to rise i pray that im placed in the sky
nurse pull the plug im literally dyin to meet the lord
and on my trip speak with hoards of people who had to meet the sword
momma dont cry im really livin better now
no bodys heart is cold no need for a sweater now
i feel no pain its all love no slugs
naturally high dont need no drugs
guess i was forgavin or god just forgot
about the deadly sins and how ive lusted a lot
as i rise i feel tension then a cord breaks and snaps
then i feel some arms come and graze my back
im thrown to the ground then through and down some more
am i goin to hell just cuz of adultry with one whore
this cant be happenin i must be dreamin
so i test it out, but i can hear my screamin
i hear a dark laugh and see a sinister grin
and remember that in all my quarrels i never let my minister win
all of the sudden its hot theres fire all around me
and every single person i see is mad the guys are all just grouchy
now i see that all my shortcomings and my fallings costly
i utter my last words....my god im sorry
just before i hit the floor i see a rush of light
hear my father "thats just like my son to fight"
i hear the moniters beepin loudly
and see my whole family start to meet around me
minister in my ear "sinnin a lot will cost ya"
then the words of my mother.."god, we thought we lost ya"
now dedicated to go to church and participate in pleasent chants
no more concernin myself with peasent rants
thank the lord...hes just givin me a second chance

Aight..

It Was Okay, Nice Idea n The Effort Will Be Appreciated I'm Sure...

6/10...Keep Elevatin Cause Theres No Doubt U Have Potential, Juss Learn To Use Ya Lines More Effectively....If U Know What I'm Sayin..?

But Yo, Return The Favor On My Battle Links

P E A C E

It really dont matter to me about you elevating because we all need to do that,,
So I my self wouldn't really have the nerve to tell you that,,,
because I understood every thing you wrote perfecty so theres no room for change or elevating if you ask me,,because I feel like your heart is in the right place
an for that I cant judge you,,only God can do that,,,
but i will tell you what I feel about it
I give you 8-10 because i was feeling the truth you put in to it
your one of those mc's like me that just wants to keep it real,,,,
so I nice drop hommie God bless all,,,


feed back is viser verser,,so heres my link,,,on my truth

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764

um.....up

damn...this is SO old