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Lil-Youngstah vs ColdSTEEL
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-10-04 at 12:06 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
ColdSTEEL has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 12:17 PM.
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Lil youngstah. Queen of tha night..hand him his wack crown//
Hes tha rod stewert look alike..better yet tha fag at the end of fifty's back down// hes the raps bad actor white face an black frown..destin ta be famous// hes a walkin chocolate chip...the rappin andy an amous..// hes gotta be anus ..ta wanna battle an never faced concern// I met ur dentist ......he told me u had cavaties ..and he found traces of sperm// you aint dislodge'n nuthin ..that tha streets would feel// you should get charged wit aggravated flaugin an attempt to keep it real// you aint a fake....you just bit a little bit..// consider it...your shits like a hot car...soon as I strip ur bars..Ima get rid of it// dump it on a site.....get it a site..jus like rap verse// the only way you'll win if this was a battle ta see whose Raps worse... aiiiight thats mine...I guess you gonna wait ta post after reading my shit!! |
Lil-Youngstah has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 09:51 PM.
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Aight ColdSteel Check it...
ColdSteel U runnin Outta Time Dawg in Your Mind u Just Hearin Tickin-&-Tockin// Every Minute dats Passin is a New Cock-u-Suckin// Now I'ma Teach u How not 2 Mess With da "Best"// I'll Be Puttin u Down Dead With a Cap on Your ForeHead// U Screwed Up from da Brain, This Foo tryin 2 Spit but He 2 Insane// He Keeps "Injectin" Himself with Heroinne// He Keeps "Snortin" Cocaine into His System// But 4 Me u Just Anotha Lost Puppy dat I see For a Victim// So Listen of What i Have 2 Say... U Gettin a Phone Call like in Da Ring sayin U Gonna Die in Seven Days// But I'll end Your Life Quicker all I need Is to Snap my Finger// 2 tell U da Truth u Shouldn't be a Rappa instead a Singer// Cause u Ain't got What it Takes to Make it in-da-Streetz// I'll Be all Upon you Like if i Was About 2 comit Murder Bustin out a Job for da Bloodz-or-Cripz... Now Step up With me on-da-Mic// & Notice dat I'm da Mc ripper So i'll Be da Last 1 Standin on-da-Mic// Now befo i Bust a Cap, Betta Pray to God dat I Don't blow u Off da Map// And put An X ova Yo Retarted Name// Cause u Like da Rest Pathetic & Disgracin So i'll Be Leavin u in Shame// Now my Lyrical Flows will Destroy your Bones from yo Head to yo Toes// So u Gettin Shot & Killed like da Rest of my Foes// But i Gotta Say something Else i Go also By da Name of da Lyrical Composa// I'ma True "G" Down ass Vato like R.I.P DeadSoul_Ja// I'm Also Lethal LIke if i Was a True Soldier// Ready for Battle i Ain't neva Afraid of What's Gonna Happen// If u da 1 Dat i Lyrically Killed at Rappin... |
Voted For: ColdSTEEL
STEEL Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... Youngstah Punches were good too not as hard tho… Structure was lack'd... Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
hahahahaahahaha traces of sperm!!!!! crack up, that shit was ill man bro cold steal man you got my vote dawg |
Voted For: ColdSTEEL
My vote is for coldsteel. His punches were off the hook. Some of the stuff he said was better too. Lil-Youngstah was alright but coldsteel was better. Return tha favor. Vote honestly. Lightnin vs surgical |
This was feedback posted for Lil-Youngstah
jus checkin this out........................................
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Voted For: ColdSTEEL
AIGHT COLD STEEL GOT DIS HANDS DOWN he had good punches and flow and struture yo young i couldnt read yo verse becuz of yo struture it was offfffffffffff but elevate on dat u had good punches,,,,, but wasnt hitting harder dan cold steel mayne i give cold steel da vote becuz of harder punches and flow lil. young work on dat struture mayne ~peace! |
Voted For: ColdSTEEL
LY: blah your verse looked like a story and yes that is most definitely not a good thing punches were decent and ummmm flow was very choppy..................... and most of it wasn't very original....................... COLDSTEEL: a decent verse little above average.... flow was okay got choppy a tad................ but verse more original and effective in my opinion so i vote for.......... vote: coldsteel |
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