[]D [] []v[] []D vs -SoLdIeR-
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

lets go steve......

im gonna go easy on you "rude-boy" lol

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 04:02 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

[]D [] []v[] []D has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 04:04 PM.

-SoLdIeR- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-07-04 04:08 PM.

[]D [] []v[] []D is a friend of mine so you may not understand some of the punches and personals we both got.....

U aint got shit on dese legit rhymes dat i spit
while i balzin a hit u chattin sum lyrical bullshit
sat in for weeks wit pen n paper,still cudnt beat me
best b prayin 4 a savior
u aint a "soldier" u more of a sailor
wit my head ill impail ya,u a bitch lyk it in jail ya?
Lyk i sed jus a poofy lil sailor
or woz u a speedy lil snitch?
u aint so qiuck look steve wilson got in wit ya bitch!!!

This ma lil homie but im bout to kill him nice n easy,
Ya rhymes are weak n like ya name they’re …*cheesey!! Real Name - Steven Cheeseman!!
Obviously you joint this site cos u wanna be me,
U can copy me “cat” but you wont beat me, im “tweety”
This boys so damn ugly, he’s got a pointy head,
He’ll wanna “gore” me, when I make this “bull”shitter go red
This net geek claims he a pimp, truth is he’s only 14 years old….
Pimped himself, put his virginity on ebay, but it never got sold,
Your rhymes are soft and mushy like that hotel dude Cassidy,
But it don’t “get no better” than me, it just comes naturally!


good luck man..... peace!!

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get some votes on this please people, all will be repayed with an honest vote on your battles!!

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Voted For: -SoLdIeR-

yo..where was the hard hitten punches? Both of yaw punches cam abit soft. Yours had hit abit harder then DVDs that's why your gettin this vote. But your structure was kinda messed up. His was abit better then yours. But I give this to you for the punches.

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plz ppl vote on dis d favour wil b returned

Voted For: []D [] []v[] []D

Vote: D(()))D wateva his anme is

Lyrics:s
Multies:---
Personals:d
Punches:d
Structure:tie
Wordplay:s
Originality:s
Opening:d
Ending: d

Overall: a tight battle were both verse were aight. Peace

Voted For: -SoLdIeR-

you got this one because you had a better verse, but ya'll was both weak