a must read poetric (a must read deep poetic)
 

Summer Breeze

dont tell me who i am, what i am,
where i been, what i seen,
your opinion is unfaithful possesions
and the life i've seen and drank is what i dream.
put aside highness on the grass
wine pours into my mind into fullness
the capacity is overreached in,
the world revovles around my sins.
the grass is still riding along,
sweet isaak is singing our songs,
but i still live into the sins.
all the miserys that ive lived within
untitled is what we are here,
block away the frightful fears.
i am my own enemy and i lost,
i was so ready for love and it fell.
inside the evermores the spells,
but the grass is still rolling on,
my summer burns under the sun,
and my goals here are none....


Evanescence

Hand in hand our love was so prodigious
Upon the prow i've been writing screeds
Missing ephemeral walks shape dolorous needs
Tearfalls compact my face like frozen rains
Contemplating reasons run upon feightrains
Was i really the propagator or was it a dream?
Are things as malign as they seem?
Storytales pace these frozen lakes
If this is despair then snakes await
Until the end when the cold waters fade
Silvenman, Swordman, Fisherman know the pain
All and all were all the same


The Forest

As i walk into the forest of hope
I whirl around; i tangle to get support
Shivering from feelings of unforseen life
Keeping my eyes to further psychological heights
Suddenly a soft tapping sways into my head
Your voice emerges then all else is shed
So sweet like the midsummer's calling
Listening further deep into faith i go falling
Betraying all of my inner furys seen
But i did nothing it was merely a dream
Sexual selection with who to mate with
Our biological seductions fades all myth
I'm no dreamer for i have felt pain
Around and around brain functions gone insane
If my outreach and offsprings future splits
My brain shall never dismiss or be lifted
Darling things are so beautiful here
You can escape your pain, shade all your fears
If in dreams you invest more then time
And let go of all other cynical pride
We'd be together forever it seems
Inside this paradise
Inside this dream..


Meaning

Gas into the bil formulate
Smoke into shape before us
As i walk into the dreams we create
Window pane dwells it's us we deviate
This is a vieled cycle never on ends
sleep with a shadow.. we could be pretenders
realitys presence voided,
passes lifes silence..
so harmless, we suffer
death shall become us..
to this narrow place our dreams on rust..
with pure meaning seek the truthfulness..
pieces are my walk i found a key..
meaning?

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wow............i can see the talent.....even thought it was long it was still worth the read....i've been workin on a peice ima post now....return tha feed please...peace

this was a beautiful poem right here, this is what i come in here to see, wow, i like th eway you set this up, the vividness of your words and the imagery that they portray, wow, amazing stuff, keep em coming man,,pc1

danks mayne feedback uppin

pretty good stuff.