::Straight Sickness::
 

::::::::::::::Ya'll Made Me This WaY!!:::::::::::::

::i spit sadistic-lyrics that'll blow-up-a-mic::
::to all tha mystic-spirits when they show-up-at-night::
::i'll grab-you-with-a-quote that'll slow-up-ya-fight::
::then i'll stab-you-in-the-throat, make you throw-up-a-knife::
::i'm makin money-on-the-side cuz i hoe-up-ya-wife::
::i fucked ya honey-in-my-ride man she know-what-i-like::
::Shit i've popped-so-many-pills that i glow-up-at-nite::
::and i got-so-many-skills man my flow-is-so-tight::
::i'll Fuckin murda-tha-vets just watch me shred-up-tha-mic::
::man i'll serve-em-with-threats and fill they head-up-with-fright::
::i hit-so-many-drugs man i'm-as-high-as-a-kite::
::i'll strip-those-silly-thugs of their diamonds-and-ice::
::i'll send a clip-of-cold-slugs from my tech-to-a-dyke::
::kill a bitch-in-cold-blood man, i'll get-you-tonite::
::i'mma set-you-a-lite, man my scripts-Fuckin-blaze::
::i'm that best-on-this-site compared to you Penis-suckin-gays::

No BEEF!!!!!! just what was on my head................

feedback would be much appreciated thanx

COLOR=Sienna]nice rymhe stucture right through
pop some bigger vocab in there next time to elevate a level
good solid rap. :thumbup:

maybe we can battle so u can help me elevate.....this is gonna be an audio.....and we should battle hit me up

uupin this for some feed....ill return tha favor.....

thanx......uppin this for some more feed yall...p.m me battle links

yo that shit was hot fam.. you got made skill's......

hit up my open mic......been gone for awhile

this was an okay drop..all around it was pretty short but it had some nice -punchlines..decnet multies..the structure was pretty good... overall nothing more i can say it was pretty good drop..overall keep it up and next time just try to add some imagery ..and elevate..and you'll be good

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