::Vacant::
 

::Vacant::

I am no longer complete
But am a whole of nothingness
I have lost my will to survive
Bearing this world is far too much
For I am my own frailty
Who has misplaced his destiny
Only to find more misery
Without a soul to fill this body
I have no choice
But to linger on into the depths of my mind
Where I find nothing but darkness
Behind this forged smile
Lays a million pieces of my heart
Shattered within
Tearing away what little is left of me
I bleed fearlessly
For I know that you cannot break
What is already ruined
And you cannot take
What is already vacant
My mind
My body
My soul
Vacant

not really your regular poem...but real deep...this is the first time ive done one of these types of poems....feedback appreciated

<<wonders why noone has responded, i liked this a lot, nice flow, and deep content, i liked the way you rhymed here as well, good job for this type of poem,keep it up.....1

thanx......uppin this for some more feed yall...p.m me battle links