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Elusiv G vs livin legend
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Elusiv G has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 05:49 PM.
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Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 05:50 PM.
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lyrically and physically my words send u to ya corner like a boxer
ya attempt to beat me will only have the heater red u like a lobster like a deadly combinationn of hypnotic and vodka my lyrics are flammable cops find ya body parts in a few different places but ya death's unexplainable the only way ya spitting hot shit is if ya head is up my ass and u got an "anal-view" (i'm spiting hot shit) Lyrics manifest inside ya body leave ya "brain-outta-wack" get blasted with a pump the size of a poolstick like it "came-outta-shaq" so u gonna run when the semi auto let's loose and attacks doctors operate and find a few clips in ya back lyrics getting hungry eat u like a midnight snack the only time u hear clapping (gun shots) is when people applaud bitch u prewrite ya shit which means ya a fraud don't step to me i'll let the heater spray u down red beams paint ya face like a birthday clown lyrics slap u around like an abusive father u know u gonna lose this battle so why bother heater cut ya body open leave slits like gills scare u so much have ya face turn whiter then ex pills riding through ya hood i stop by ya house looking for a quickie see ya girl slide up in her blouse i'm hot so my fire can't be doused have u rubbing sticks together to get hot like ya camping out hands down u already know i'm the "vic-tor" lyrics become legendary like a da vinci "pic-ture" slug hit u like a truck u won't know what hit ya coming up against me u better bring ya whole crew with ya lyrics operate like a doctor cut ya body open u my patient i'm an arson leave ya body smoking but i'm tired of playing but i'm gonna end this "right-here" and the winner of this battle is already "quite-clear" |
yo yo time to rain on dis brer
yo yo yo..... Battlin' Livin Legend, (hallaleuia), add 1 mo to da win record Yo dis this Legend gon b LIVIN impotent n shook, cos his balls gonna b took Neuture this dog,leave him limpin all da way home feelin robbed Ma record aint impressive, i aint sressin' Cos hes own pant hes messin', next 2 da PC countin' his blessin's Ma rhymes are indelible, ma opposition is not formidable Definently not credible, u winning? highly illogical cos I b da realst of killaz, there are few who r iller And its not u legend so step bak, or get twisted like nik naks Beaten like eggs, if im lazy a simple 4 shots to tha head u gettin frightened seeing apparitions, shook by ma lyrical composition drowning in yo excrement,ur turning red wit embarrasement A flyweight bout to go down to a lightweight, down outta sight Its so easy as im battlin' a nigga wit no lyrical might tha New York Kincks,....... unlike u dnt get ripped quick, Every line is anuva vote, this shit aint nuttin but K.O 196posts to ur name, ur rhymes sound company made Sorta like u spittin 4 fame, ashaming tha game Kinda like puffy, oh well i'll spit "mase" U best get duckin', or it'll hit u in tha face U amuse niggaz wit fake ebonics, claimin ur rhymes r toxic Only yo mama buys yo shit to rock wit, Brers buy ma rhymes simply cos dey legit If I had time I bet I find ur rhymes on ohhla.com Go thru ma sistas collection find ur shit on Backstreets cd-rom! |
yo nik aks r Uk crisps dat r all twisted and shit.............ha ha livin legend u been bit no punches jus lyrical slef glorification and punches get mo den lyrics...but dis was a gd battle...u ever wanna go again jus holla at me...dnt 4get to up dis shit...all of y'all vote and vote in detail. Peace
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uppin dis y'all.............................................
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Voted For: Livin Legend
livin legend won this imo.... flow: livin vocab: livin complexity: elusiv punches: livin by a lil personals: elusiv overall:livin livin legend: 6/10 elusiv:5.5/10 this was a close battle both u cats can elevate tho.. props to both.. livin just work on personals and punches and youll be set... elusiv u can work on punches and personals too dogg.. work on that flow too |
Voted For: Livin Legend
well u took it on word play alone, structure was good WAAAAAAAY TO LONG ha but i was feeli'n it, punches, metas, personals, structure,wordplay:livin legend some word play , some goood word choice jus work on ya rhym'n:elusiv g drop a honest vote this battle was a quicky http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=148516 |
Voted For: Livin Legend
wasnt feelin this battle ... overall i think LL took this one ... some better punches and decent word-play ... |
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Voted For: Livin Legend
i vote for liven legend good battle for the most part Elusiv g: Battlin' Livin Legend, (hallaleuia), add 1 mo to da win record Yo dis this Legend gon b LIVIN impotent n shook, cos his balls gonna b took Neuture this dog,leave him limpin all da way home feelin robbed Ma record aint impressive, i aint sressin' Cos hes own pant hes messin', next 2 da PC countin' his blessin's Ma rhymes are indelible, ma opposition is not formidable Definently not credible, u winning? highly illogical cos I b da realst of killaz, there are few who r iller And its not u legend so step bak, or get twisted like nik naks Beaten like eggs, if im lazy a simple 4 shots to tha head u gettin frightened seeing apparitions, shook by ma lyrical composition drowning in yo excrement,ur turning red wit embarrasement A flyweight bout to go down to a lightweight, down outta sight Its so easy as im battlin' a nigga wit no lyrical might tha New York Kincks,....... unlike u dnt get ripped quick, Every line is anuva vote, this shit aint nuttin but K.O 196posts to ur name, ur rhymes sound company made Sorta like u spittin 4 fame, ashaming tha game Kinda like puffy, oh well i'll spit "mase" U best get duckin', or it'll hit u in tha face U amuse niggaz wit fake ebonics, claimin ur rhymes r toxic Only yo mama buys yo shit to rock wit, Brers buy ma rhymes simply cos dey legit If I had time I bet I find ur rhymes on ohhla.com Go thru ma sistas collection find ur shit on Backstreets cd-rom! it was straight u could have had harder puches and a better structure (which alot of people need to work on) but other than that pretty solid flow i have to give you props livin legend: lyrically and physically my words send u to ya corner like a boxer ya attempt to beat me will only have the heater red u like a lobster like a deadly combinationn of hypnotic and vodka my lyrics are flammable cops find ya body parts in a few different places but ya death's unexplainable the only way ya spitting hot shit is if ya head is up my ass and u got an "anal-view" (i'm spiting hot shit) Lyrics manifest inside ya body leave ya "brain-outta-wack" get blasted with a pump the size of a poolstick like it "came-outta-shaq" so u gonna run when the semi auto let's loose and attacks doctors operate and find a few clips in ya back lyrics getting hungry eat u like a midnight snack the only time u hear clapping (gun shots) is when people applaud bitch u prewrite ya shit which means ya a fraud don't step to me i'll let the heater spray u down red beams paint ya face like a birthday clown lyrics slap u around like an abusive father u know u gonna lose this battle so why bother heater cut ya body open leave slits like gills scare u so much have ya face turn whiter then ex pills riding through ya hood i stop by ya house looking for a quickie see ya girl slide up in her blouse i'm hot so my fire can't be doused have u rubbing sticks together to get hot like ya camping out hands down u already know i'm the "vic-tor" lyrics become legendary like a da vinci "pic-ture" slug hit u like a truck u won't know what hit ya coming up against me u better bring ya whole crew with ya lyrics operate like a doctor cut ya body open u my patient i'm an arson leave ya body smoking but i'm tired of playing but i'm gonna end this "right-here" and the winner of this battle is already "quite-clear" pretty solid flow also i think u had a better structure for the most part and some of your punches were a little better close battle guys and a good one ~one xplicit drop an honest vote here to return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140006 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=140004 |
Voted For: Livin Legend
Livin Legend Punches were hard & they landed... Structure was pretty decent... Flow was pretty good... Vocab was good too...and easy to read it... Elusiv G Punches were good too not as hard as Livin Legend's tho... Structure was good.. Flow was decent and tha... Vocab was pretty decent... |
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