e-dubz vs WhiTe_Tee
 

Battle Rules:
6-10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 10:32 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

WhiTe_Tee has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 07:42 PM.

e-dubz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 07:48 PM.

27-4 and this kid thinkin he hot But Guess Again Cuz You're Not/
You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire and Yo Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot/
I Guess You Can Call My Lyrics "Apples" The Way I Rot Minds/ (snow white)
Your "Saliva" Must Be "Cold" Cuz You still Aint "Spit" A "Hot" Line/
Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically "Gifted"/
I Got Balls Of Steel Speed Up Ejaculation With My Nitro Sauce/
You Got A Dick Like Computer Software Cuz Its "MicroSoft"/
Still Killed You With Punchlines Wit My Tricks Under Your Sleeve/
Plant My Seimen In ya Mom And Name You "Duke" Cuz You Da numba One Seed/

ahhh his recrod is 27-6 i read it wrong..

heres somethin off top.. should be enuff

blasts from under my sound’s like a crash of thunder
‘divide your dreams’ you still wouldnt be ‘half’ of *one der
this nigga could b my clone and still not match my structure
cuz E ‘sticks and moves’ like.... hit and run accupuncture
i'll damage now while i'm working, and 4 more times a week
some wannabe Jayz's...... all of your rhymes are 'Bleek'
i’ll confront any lyricist... with a wish for confrontation
bring ya illest rhymes, I don't give a shit' like 'constipation'
imma 'just do it' like nike.... let ‘air force’ out your lungs
ima 'burn' yo like blunts..then fill you up wit hollows like tums

*wonder

Voted For: e-dubz

both were good and iight nice battle

AShit tee: ya were ok you had a nice verse good lines ya lines were a lil strexhed though and ya had not good flow and structre too you had ok punches and personalds but not ass good and some wwere kinda weird

Edubz: ya came good on this one it was good and ht had good punches and nice personals good strucutre and it flowed great my vote s goes to e dubs even though white tte did goosd e dubz hit harder

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Voted For: e-dubz

dubz got this.. it was close but dubz had better punches.. just seemed to hit harder.. structure was better.. white tee ur struct was fukked... and dubz flowed alot better thats why im voting dubz

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Voted For: e-dubz

ok white whack opener second bar was ok that christmas line is played that dick line was funny lol ender was whacked flow is ok and structure is a little streched vocab is ok sun i voted in a few of your battles and i know your nice you fucking slacked like crazy here this is the worst i read from you your much better then this 3/10
e dubz dope flow and structure was on point punches could be better but they were good here its a gansta verse which i also liked disses were ok vocab was good and that and the dope flow and wordplay got you a much better verse 6/10

ROFL... e-dubz... now i know how u got 26-7 with ur wack ass raps... d/r to get this far? i love the dickridin... keep em cmin dick riders

i dont dickride that shit was whacked and you lost thats why i voted aganist you but since i see you catch feelings you are now blacklisted

damn nigga, dont say 'd/r' every time u get merked..cant take a loss damn i hate niggas like dat

Voted For: WhiTe_Tee

27-4 and this kid thinkin he hot But Guess Again Cuz You're Not/
You Could Set Your Computer Screen On Fire and Yo Verse Still Wouldnt Look Hot/
// nice opener

i'll damage now while i'm working, and 4 more times a week
some wannabe Jayz's...... all of your rhymes are 'Bleek'
// NICE PUNCH MAYNE

i’ll confront any lyricist... with a wish for confrontation
bring ya illest rhymes, I don't give a shit' like 'constipation'
// LOL LOL KO

I Guess You Can Call My Lyrics "Apples" The Way I Rot Minds/ (snow white)
Your "Saliva" Must Be "Cold" Cuz You still Aint "Spit" A "Hot" Line/
// YEA TIGHT PUNCH

Lyrical God Like Jesus Started Rappin I'll Leave You Spiritually Lifted/
You Could Get Ryhmes For Christmas And Still Wouldnt Be Lyrically "Gifted"/
// LOL NIGGA KILLLIN IT

I Got Balls Of Steel Speed Up Ejaculation With My Nitro Sauce/
You Got A Dick Like Computer Software Cuz Its "MicroSoft"/
// PUNCHE AND A PERSONAL NICE

Still Killed You With Punchlines Wit My Tricks Under Your Sleeve/
Plant My Seimen In ya Mom And Name You "Duke" Cuz You Da numba One Seed/
// BOMB CLOSA DAYUM


E-DUBZ

blasts from under my sound’s like a crash of thunder
‘divide your dreams’ you still wouldnt be ‘half’ of *one der
// YEA NICE OPNER KINDA BETTA DAN WHITE

this nigga could b my clone and still not match my structure
cuz E ‘sticks and moves’ like.... hit and run accupuncture
// HMMMM NICE GOOD

imma 'just do it' like nike.... let ‘air force’ out your lungs
ima 'burn' yo like blunts..then fill you up wit hollows like tums
// KO NICE

YO NICE MAYNE FROM BOTH SHIT

I GOTS TO GIVE DIS TO WHITE TEE DIS NIGGA HAD PUNCHES FLOWIN/AND WORDPLAYS LIKE AND 1 HANDLING BASKETBALLS/

YO E-DUBZ U WERE GOOD TOO MAYNE NICE PUNCHES WERE GREAT OPENER AND CLOSA BUT U GOTS TO GIVE WHITE-TEE PROPS MAYNE//

WHTIE TEE GETS MY VOTE YO RETURN AN HONEST VOTE ON MY BATTLE AGAINST LIL.TRIP


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