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DrasticMeasureZ 09-08-04 08:11 PM

DrasticMeasureZ vs Lil-trip
 
Battle Rules:
8-20 lines max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

becuz dis an vet battle 200 post

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-08-04 at 11:11 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

System 09-08-04 08:12 PM

DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 08:12 PM.

System 09-08-04 08:19 PM

Lil-trip has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 08:19 PM.

Lil-trip 09-08-04 09:24 PM

'Lyrically' i'll go to Drastic Measures, to prove whos 'Better'
Your lines drop as hard, as a motherfuckin 'Blue jays feather'
It don' matter if your udner the weather, your jus 'Wetter'
n im talkin bout your lips bitch, im more international than 'Leather'..

8-20 Lines homie its too simple, new rules only words above 3 syllables
your rap career is like n asians eyes, barley fucking visible
your comin with lines more minimal, than a sketchcase feels invisible
your like a handicap in a relay, your as equipped as your are physical..

Contact is somethin you enjoy, lets make your sexual preference clear
if you aint gettin it in the rear, your shiftin your bois 'stick' from 1st to 6th gear
is this is your climax year?, than i also think Houdini will re-appear
cus im a nigga battlin without fear, your still battlin the fact of bein a queer..

aint somethin you'll admit, i cant even concieve it in my society
ill battle you in cold blood, worse than any sibling rivalry
my lines are plain sick homie, n here comes trips irony
ill fuck you up the opposite the way of your mom, ill actually do it silently..

sleepin homie your shits finished, your n "Asshole" n i aint gonna soften
bitch "you are what you eat", so your n "Asshole" faggat who aint worth stoppin
id like to see this bitch spit near compton, n youll see three knives popped in
after there done bustin that 'Asshole", they feel bad for givin your boyfriend more 'Options'..

..~Hollah Lil Trip

DrasticMeasureZ 09-08-04 09:46 PM

Sick generically enough to say, "walk-it-off", to people wit cancer/
Put "puppet~strings" on your "inner~organs", make you a real "belly~dancer"//
My rhymes like storing currency, after your shit, I come wit a "fine~answer"/(financer)
I'm damaging your front-"deer"(frontier), while I got the red light on Prancer//(Santa's a little late this year kids...)
Call me a lyrical "cereal" killer, untraced as I slip toxins in ya "corn flakes"/
Expose "trip " like a dirty German video, virgin anal forced rape//(Bloody mess...ew)
Concave~ya~vertibrate vertically till it's literally "bent~backwards"/
The heat I leave, cause third-"degrees" more than 3-combined "protractors"//
Spit wit ballistic masochistic sadistic battle statistics/
The gravity and velocity in which my shit drops is testin laws of physics//
I'll leave ya anatomy naked, lyrics burn away the layers of flesh/
Your rhymes "played out" on my browser, i'm strait-up pressin "REFRESH"//
Envision~the~visions I've been gifted with a vocabulary, list as a visionary/
I'm "defining" illness like RapVerse itself, yet your left needin' a "dictionary"//

OOOOOOO IAM DAT ILL BITCH

L.T. get's snapped quickly, vertibrate~to~leg, badman on his knee to beg/
While drastic making him "come out" early in his Rv career like this was a "bootleg"//
Your weak "delivery" get's a sickly licked stamp as I lyrically "return~to~sender"/

e-dubz 09-08-04 10:05 PM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

nice battle..props to both of yall
DM-nice flow and i liked the multis and wordplay, nice punches and personals, overall id give ur verse a 7/10
LT-ur shit flowed good, punches were good and vocab was more complex then DM but he got u on punches and his multis were good, no hate overall ur verse is a 6.5/10
close battle.. v/DM

Golden shellz 09-08-04 10:07 PM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

damn dat was a hot battle, my boy here won it cuz of dat extra push. it was very tite, but drastic had harder hitting punches.i like his metas the were connecting really well, but a lil hint dont explain at da end of ur lines it messe up ur structure

E Looch 09-08-04 10:46 PM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

drastic measurez- decnt verse lines are to stretched though creativitie and wordplay are there though so thats good an ya punchs are about average just work on constent punchs and puttin personals in your verse

lil trip-your punchs need work to there mostly weak u try at creativitie and wordplay just fell a lil bit short had soome decent personals verse wasnt very good all around though work on most of everything buddy

DrasticMeasureZ 09-11-04 10:06 AM

OOOOOOOOOOOOK uppin for votes people

DrasticMeasureZ 09-12-04 02:15 PM

dis battle was up for an week yo shut it mayne uppin

DrasticMeasureZ 09-16-04 05:03 PM

yo dis battle been up for 2 weeks uppin votes peep'z

~Ku$tUm-Im@gE~ 09-22-04 06:04 PM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

vote drastic....
better punches and wordplay.... nice multis all the way through his verse....
lil-trip u have potentail...u might have won metas....but he just came harder over all

please return favor \/\/

DrasticMeasureZ 10-03-04 08:08 PM

uppin ha iam bak and wat~!

Dirty Nigga 10-05-04 06:50 AM

Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

measurez got this
better flow to the brain cells.....
more complex verse
better punches an personals
hard hittin wordplay........................
nice drop drastic
hands down u got my vote
return the fave in my sig

p e a c e


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