Ill-Grammatix vs sultan
 

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Check in by: 09-11-04 at 10:07 PM

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I'm going to eat... i'll accept after i get some grub and get some sleep... been at work all night... good luck yo!

by the way... I'm in Iraq and it's 6 am here!

Sultan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-08-04 10:14 PM.

It's time to dine...and I hope ya hungry//
Rhymes like "wild turkey suprise"....leavin guts rumbling like Bugs Bunny*//
And niggaz say I rule lines like Tommy (Maddox)//
Put the "Steal" to ya "ears" (Steelers)//
Give ya a "package" (a lost)//
Motivate ya ass to start running//
I treat this shit like "Monopoly"//
Cuz I "Shoot" niggaz off "Ladders", tryin' to elevate on my "property"**//
This battle's locked up//
I can't say if ya "pussy or an asshole"...either way, ya gettin "fucked"//
And, ain't no way you can recover, dude//
Cuz I'll leave a nigga in the "dark"....like the girl on 3LW***//
U wanna be a "Rebel"....chillin', "Campin"//
Until I "Nick" a piece of ya jaw....courtosy of my shinny, chrome "Cannon"//
Sultan knows that his rhymes are brutal//
U can tell by my opponent's name....I've been had his "Stamp-of-Approval"//
And this shit came straight from my mental//
I've packed your shit up....cuz there's new management at "Merk Central"//


Explanations:
*Bugs Bunny fed Taz "wild turkey suprise" (bombs in the shape of a turkey) on one of his cartoons.
**The old boardgame "Shoots & Ladders".
***The first member to leave the group, 3LW, b/c other members said she was too "dark".

Ill-Grammatix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 01:08 AM.

just look above me... that bullshyt that was dropped was just "in-sultan"
like old school R&B songs done again by Michael Bolton (lol)
I'm hopin ya learn a lesson from this...
ya steppin into my arena; ain't no way you disrespecting my crib
I'm wrecking this kid; disect him from his av to his sig
then put him on a "weight loss" plan for kids who thinking they "B.I.G."
Original rhymes... and yo lines? they come a dime a dozen
Ya lyrics ain't buzzin' cousin! Stop breaking the bank for nothin'!
I'm crushing ya flow, crushing ya hopes, crushing ya dreams
you just a textee with a rap career that's stuck in a screen
It's gon' take more than just a mere noobie to do me
You ain't "Scrappy" enough; I think you need to go and find "Shaggy and Scooby"
and pray that "Velma" can come up with a hypothetical thoery
cuz without that... there ain't no other way you gettin' near me

*finish'm off*

back that ass up or get clapped with the quickness
death by Ill-Grammatix's ya fastest to seeing sickness
I'll flip ya simplistic linguistics and leave you mentally twisted
so that ya brain no longer knows that you existed
acidic flows I spit at foes with hits thats crit-i-cal
landing blows like Riddick Bowe while you crying "Quit it, yo!"...
lmao

No need for explanations but if ya need it i'll be more than happy to drop it on you...lol

that line should read: death by Ill- Grammatix's ya fastes "route" to seeing sickness...
3rd bar... got an av and no sig (dissected it...lol)..."weight-loss" plan (not even a featherweight or lightweight yet)

everything else should be easy to understand

Good luck man... not a bad drop at all

oh yeah...line one: bull shyt dropped... In-sultan = that's where it came from.. in Sultan...lol

This was feedback posted for Sultan
 

nice drops, good elevation... brutal hits, didnt think ya had that in you...

Voted For: Ill-Grammatix

Aight

sultan: youve got potential... fix ya structure though man... Seriously, ya flow was there, but really hard to see.. And ya vocab is aight but you need to word ya shit better.. like i got it but i had to think n shit n it was kinda far fetched.. plus peeps always say the punches that need explainin are the weakest, unless they personal...

Ill: LoL at ya opener and that scooby shit... and that "stuck in a screen" line was nice.. flow was good, then got better in the last stanza, at the cost of punches... But ya punches in the first paragraph were wreckin him, so its all good... liked ya closer..

Yo Ill, drop me a PM sometime.. gotta catch up

one

haha... that guys cool....

no doubt... i'll holla... yeah, punches were harder in the beginning but homie did his thing, too... not bad for a kat i barely ever see post :thumbup:

Voted For: Sultan

Aight, Sultan Hit Harder Punches n Had Some Nice Wordplay In My Opinnon, Used His Personals Alot Better...

Ill Ya Had Some Aight Rhymes, Not As Good As I've Seen U Post But Still An Okay Drop..

Keep Em Comin Ya'll

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