2pac vs SUCC MACOKK
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 12:49 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

2pac has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 12:50 AM.

k succ macokk no more cocks for u lol jus like jewPRIDE/
macokk all u gonna see is a mcglock oh oops i lied/
whipe all that bullshit off your chin/
bassically wat im sayin is fuck U, wife, and children/
nigga nothin can save u not even super man/
shit fuck super man when u got peter pan/
damn son i guess em's right when shit hit tha fan/
fuck wat can u say/ exept for the same old shit we all know its gay/

SUCC MACOKK has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 11:56 PM.

Damn your raps are about as good as Ur ruff tuff thug jokes...
Fuck even if U called Urself 'dope' you wouldn't make me choke!...
Ur talent is shit,so you rip off a legends name to make yourself look better....
Nigga,the only thing U could 'rip' is a fuckin preopened letter!!...
Shit son U call everyone gay,when U want tell ruff Ur gonna 'stick' it in his mouth...
I'll 'murder' you nuff said,send U 'deep down', but 'deeper' than south! (weak closer)

NNNEEEXXXTTT!!!

uppin for sum votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK
 

haha nice drop kid.... u def murdah this kid....

VIOLENT TYPE NIGGA'S YA HERD!!!

Voted For: SUCC MACOKK

wow this was a shitty ass battle. both verses sucked ass, so i give it to this dude, cuz i liked that line about the preopened letter. that was the best line in this whole battle. punches werent anything special for both, only one hot personal and succ had it

Voted For: SUCC MACOKK

Succ Macokk took diss
better flow personals n punches were ok
had a lil wordplay 2 seemed easy 4 u dough

2pac
dawg keep elevatin u were forcin a lil 2 me
u structure was ok but u flowed about nuttin
attack da other man don't just flow about bullshit
u could do better keep workin on it

give a honest vote 2 da battles in my sig i voted on ya battle

This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK
 

Not gonna vote.. this battle is pretty close yall on the same skill level.

peace

uppin...

up this shit...

This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK
 

Not voting for personal reasons, I just wanted to see how bad 2pac's gonna lose by...

Voted For: SUCC MACOKK

i liked SUCC's metas and flow. i didnt like his first line, kinda weak. and his closer was kinda basic.
2pac was just way too simple i think. hes vocab just want there at all. his flow was good, but kinda basic

plz drop a vote: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...581479&posted=1

This was feedback posted for SUCC MACOKK
 

weak and complicated battle

punches-
personals- SUCC
multis- SUCC
multas- SUCC
wordplay- neither
flow- Thug

SUCC thank god u knew your closer wuz weak. um u had some good personals, did your hw on him. just keep elevatin. also if swearin throws your flow off than dont swear.

Thug i didnt understand one part of your verse, and i dont think u tried real hard. just threw sometin on, anythin that rhymed.

SUCC:
"Damn your raps are about as good as Ur ruff tuff thug jokes...
Fuck even if U called Urself 'dope' you wouldn't make me choke!..." nice personal.

Thug:
"k succ macokk no more cocks for u lol jus like jewPRIDE/
macokk all u gonna see is a mcglock oh oops i lied/" um ya. best i found. not much to look at.

v/SUCC if i could vote