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Tha Professional 09-09-04 12:58 AM

ruff_tuff_thug vs Tha Professional
 
Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Feedin
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-09-04 at 01:28 AM

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System 09-09-04 12:59 AM

Tha Professional has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 12:59 AM.

System 09-09-04 12:59 AM

ruff_tuff_thug has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 12:59 AM.

G_$peed 09-09-04 04:39 PM

the professional is a fuckin joke...
you would tremble when i spoke...
it doesnt matter to me if you big...
look yo bitch ass dont have a sigg...
face you wack get outta here kid...
my rhymes destroy your hits deploy...
nuthin but wackness and dont enjoy...
my punchlines hard you are a retard...
thats all i gotta say to ya bitch...

G_$peed 09-09-04 10:10 PM

yo wus taken so long...

Tha Professional 09-09-04 11:34 PM

You ugly lazy fuck...making the cut? Pro's ripping this fool/
till he wishes he could get wet like fat kids who sit near the pool/
dissin this dude...need help...you should of listened in school/
I’m viscious and rude like a blind man in england im shitting on dude/
it’s scripted-who’ll-lose I’m blasting herbs...
leaving a whole in more places then a patch of dirt/
drop you so hard your head cracks the earth...
then murder you in a catholic church so you can witness the mass-occur/
your really boring kid...but lets expand the beef/
cause Pro's like an anemic I’m not really a fan of t’s/

Ill-Grammatix 09-10-04 01:45 AM

Voted For: Tha Professional

I vote for pro on this joint...

don't know what RTT was thinking when he wrote that shyt... lines were all trash... no flow... i thought it was a mother goose rhyme or some shyt... no effort in it at all... never do this again

pro... nice wordplay... the mass-occur line killed it... structure was ok... still needs work... shyt wasn't as simplistic as RTT... real easy win.... even through some multi's in there!

intensify effect 09-10-04 01:51 AM

This was feedback posted for Tha Professional
 
Hahaha That Was Murdah!!!!!!!!!!!

Violent Type Niggas!!!!!

Hot Shit Mang But U Wasted A Good Verse On Someone Lame But Still Hot Like Fire!!!!

Hate chew 09-10-04 10:17 AM

Voted For: Tha Professional

PRO TOOK IT NO DOUBT...... WHY?

ruff..
the professional is a fuckin joke...
you would tremble when i spoke...
..not a punch..weak rhyme...2/10
it doesnt matter to me if you big...
look yo bitch ass dont have a sigg...
.....tryed to go personnal but didnt even use a punch..weak rhyme again...3/10..
face you wack get outta here kid...
my rhymes destroy your hits deploy...
nuthin but wackness and dont enjoy
not to sure what kid was rhyming with..that line didnt really fit in there.....the next two lines dont make sense...no flow...weak rhyme...again no punch..2/10
my punchlines hard you are a retard...
thats all i gotta say to ya bitch...
...the weakest closing i have seen in a while...no punch..nothing to leave you standing there thinking...3/10

THE PROFESSIONAL........
You ugly lazy fuck...making the cut? Pro's ripping this fool/
till he wishes he could get wet like fat kids who sit near the pool..
dissin this dude...need help...you should of listened in school/

...A PUNCH!!! ..NOT THE STRONGEST BUT IT WAS STILL A LINE..5/10
I’m viscious and rude like a blind man in england im shitting on dude/
WAK PUNCH ..NO RHYME...3/10
it’s scripted-who’ll-lose I’m blasting herbs...
leaving a whole in more places then a patch of dirt/
drop you so hard your head cracks the earth...
TRYED TO GET A PUNCH IN BUT DIDNT REALLY CONNECT..BUT STILL ATTEMPTED A PUNCH..4/10
then murder you in a catholic church so you can witness the mass-occur/
your really boring kid...but lets expand the beef/
cause Pro's like an anemic I’m not really a fan of t’s/
WEAK HYMES BUT A BETTER CLOSING THAN RUFFS..4/10

VOTE :THE PROFESSIONAL

G_$peed 09-10-04 09:21 PM

uppin...

NoMercy 09-10-04 09:24 PM

Voted For: ruff_tuff_thug

not to much of a batle but realy ruff tuff took it he elavated a bit more but needs to add some wordplay in there and a little more metas:
vocab: pro
punches: ruff
multi's: ruff
metas: no one
opener: pro
closener: ruff
v/ruff tuff thug

G_$peed 09-10-04 09:25 PM

thanx uppin...

Tha Professional 09-11-04 02:55 PM

uppin

young_buckshot 09-11-04 09:03 PM

Voted For: Tha Professional

yo ruff tuff ate u up homie srry he had way betta flow man more orginized too

TURBAN 09-11-04 09:07 PM

Voted For: Tha Professional

haha tha pro took it, it was like a novel vs a nursery rhyme, you took it wit ease, ruff tuff thug, your punches were weak, there was nothing good about you battle, props to the pro

punches//pro
meta//pro
personals//pro
opener//pro
closer//pro


vote// the pro


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