illuson vs Infamuz
 

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Check in by: 09-12-04 at 08:46 AM

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illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:48 AM.

now while hes supposdly an m.c/and hes form the D/dats what he wants ya to belive/ya got no shit on me/
ill leave ya premantly maimed/scattered brain/break open ya skull and let em hang/
yo stay in ya house/before the streets ya talk about/get ya forced out/
im on an m.c rampage/holy shit its an outrage/i tear ya apart like pitbulls did to cage/
if ya look closley theres no contest/no need to battle im the best/
and i lose alot/but ya dont know what im about/
and if im whack then im the illest whack m.c/therell ever fuckin be/
FUCK rap verse/every one on herell get merked/
Fuck everybody/ im a whit rapper i say it proudly/so heres the mic/say what ever yea want about me/

Infamuz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 08:01 AM.

look at his profile thats where i got most of this shit


look ah this bitch is 0 and 9 and is still rappin like hes sick/
theres no posible way he's the next em so get off his dick/
ha... notice this nigga is from the fuckin rap pack crew/
shit...the must be the most wack if they accepted you/
if he was a dealer hed no how to hustle some something/
hed be hard and wouldnt be gettin his face punched in/
illusion right name cuz me and yo oppenets breze~tru~you/
even if you upped ya game 500 percent i could see~tru~you/
5 bars yea thats all i need to beat this motha~fucking bitch/
damn you just lost again this aint no mother~fucking glitch/


how dose it fell losing 10 times and winning 0

nigga dont get mad at other people cuz you wack damn bitch

Voted For: Infamuz

Im Votin For Infamuz, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But Infa Came A Lil Harder With It Tho

Voted For: Infamuz

infamuz had better punches structure and just an all around betta verse so he definitely gets my vote

Voted For: Infamuz

ok all n all dis battle was GARBAGE...but heres da breakdown

punches - infamuz...it was a terrible verse but at least there were actual PUNCHES in it...most of it was soft as hell n was realll korny...work on that son...illusion just dounded like he was jus ramblin on n on jus to make barz...nigga was makin no sense at all...even worse then this nigga here so das y u lost dis catagory

Personals - Infamuz...only thing he sed was dis kidz record...other nigga aint say a godam thing...infamuz got it just cuz there actually was suttin there not cuz it was nice

Wordplay - Infamuz...the other niggaz shyt was just corny n pointless...that style is wack...dat flow is wack...infamuz got it cuz he spit actual BARZ n cuz understand it easier

Meta4s - none...both verses was simple...get creative n throw sum ill shyt in da mix iight

Enjoyment - blahh...tie...both verses needed help n it was borin to read both of em...but all n all infamuz got it cuz he was actually tryin to BATTLE illusion...illusion was jus runnin his mouth on sum other shyt...weak battle....jus work on yalls shyt n u shud improve iight

Vote - Infamuz

drop n honest vote on da battle in my sig iight

~1~

uppin 4votes

Voted For: Infamuz

Aiiiight, Infamuz Got This...

Purely On Better Structured Verse..

Both Lacked Hard Hittin Punches, Some Aight Wordplay, Ya Both Just Need To Keep Elevatin...

Infamuz Had The Better Structure n I Could Actually Follow His Verse n Feel The Melody, Nice Drops Tho...

Keep Em Comin An Return The Favor

P E A C E

uppin

Voted For: Infamuz

yo infamuz you got my vote bruv
none ov your wer outstandin but the better vocab and slightly better punches pushed the battle your way
no h8 both ov you keep on goin

illusion you are a good mc but ur using the wrong choice ov lyrics i think

try using a different rythm and say it outloud it might sound a bit corney somtimes so if you think it does change it
safe every one