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DRAG~ON vs Tha Phoenix
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10 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 150 Check in by: 09-12-04 at 01:08 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Tha Phoenix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 01:13 PM.
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DRAG~ON has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 01:14 PM.
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I’ve got this kid losin fast, his chances have already gone bleak
Scheme already told you, your not creative kinda weak If I gave you a steroid you still couldn’t punch hard Its like your too crap at science, you can never get the meth-od Ya chances are like dynamite with a thread, and kid you just blew it Yeah that name is cool… … Back when Ruff Ryders used it! damn prudent, u just stole a name.. i bet i'll watch this fake edit ...cuz like visa theft... he always trys to take the credit... You da flamethrower? Man look at the size of ya head You talk out ya ass soo much I smell shit on ya breath Matter of fact, you talk pretty like you wearin perfume, methanol This bitch couldn’t spit fire if his rhymes were made out of ethanol You frontin when you accepted this battle, I got this bitch schooled I don’t even do drugs and I’ma still smoke this fool Ya like a tool, always should be kept in tha basement And if we lose ya, then we can always find a replacement Ya might as well face it, you can’t win, go back and get a pencil Take a stencil, write until something dope hits you Until you do, you might as well leave, everyone dissed you Take a break, it don’t matter, we like ya family nobodies gonna miss you I got ya shit broke… like the crust of ya mantle You should have known, Tha Phoenix is too hot to handle! |
u think u hot as a PHOENIX but u colder dan anti-freeze
asthmatic wheeze.... u don't spit sik just cuz u sneeze tryna take my flame dat burn enternal.... fuck da inferno i leave ya mind twisted like tornados 2 Ketchup like Tomatoes Plato wouldn't have a poem or scripture 2 picture ur verse it got no flavor so ima merk u n leave cinnamon in ya hearse u fuckin X-MAN fanatic get astatic my murder is drastic 1 gettin laid off im in playoffs .... u askin paper or plastic think u lasted u been ran threw ur vision is like a tunnel so i blast diss hoe CAKE wit more holes den a FUNNEL 2 how i treat is how i eat u carnivore on da mic i luv beef if i was a STREET u couldn't BEAT wit all ya Breakin n Poppin 3 1. Tha Phoenix is a character off of X-MAN 2. Funnel Cake's have holes in em 3. Beat Street was a Break dancin movin |
Fairly wack verse man. Uppin for votes...........
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Yo Can Someone Vote On This Shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!11
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What Is With People Looking At Something 100 Times And Not Posting A Verse, Vote Goddamnit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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This was feedback posted for DRAG~ON
umm, decent battle for this site i guess =/
punches- drag-on (phoenix had simple ones) personals- i guess drag, coz of the name play in first line =/ werdplay- drag-on drop honest vote here- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=148270 flow- tie.. multis- none had any complex- drag-on.. vote- drag.. phoenix- good try, but try to add metaphores and similes to yer verse so then it makes the punches hit harder, i've seen this problem alot on this site, but its an easy thing to overcome.. f.e.- i'mma leave ya underground (on-the-ground) like an immortal technique album.. |
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WTF, I clearly won this. Uppin. |
yo we uppin 4 sum honest votes ya
we will return da favor |
Voted For: Tha Phoenix
Im Votin For Phoenix, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Pho Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Yo Uppin This Shit, Don't Sleep On This People!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix
Don't know who the Phoenix is but i smell a merkage here! openers:TP... had a personal thrown in there D-O... kinda weak...maybe if it was worded differently it woulda hit harder meta's: ehhh... nothing worth mentioning from either one multi's: D-O... limited usage but they were there TP... none used personals:TP... personals were hitting in the beginning then it was just straight dissin after that D-O... no personals at all punches:TP... hit a lot harder and was more consistant vocab: TP... better vocab all around... nice usage D-O... work on it... some good ideas but ya need to get ya point across better structure and flow: tie ok battle... good job PT |
Yo uppin for more votes peeps, don't sleep on this shit!!!!
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