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¤ÐÅž¤ vs DrasticMeasureZ
Battle Rules:
10...15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no racism slurrs Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 09-09-04 at 05:17 PM Must drop verse in 120 minutes after check in. |
DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 04:26 PM.
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¤ÐÅž¤ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 04:31 PM.
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tragically, spit magically, all "positives" like broken batteries::::battle me? served werds and "burnt" worse then "7 calories"//
lyrical razors hit abrubtly, retired like Hall of Fame Inducties:::::feelin bad, take 15 and go buy, "How to spit for dummies!"// opening tip, I'm "Elton Brand", gettin the "upper hand":::::::hitz rip your retinas, eyes roll back, now you can read "AMBULANCE"//(ECNALUBMA) like 2 kids on a cliff, you die "when push comes to shove":::::your like retards playin "nintendo", cuz I'm always a "level above"// you tremblin'~cuz, I spit flows from the "heart", it's like"venomous~blood":::::batter's up, spittin' "phatter" then your grandfather's gut// AK "sprays" like "lispy slurrin" kids with "braces"::::::drastic "always fresh" like "Lay's" is, face it, your record like your bones, I "break it"// kill you and play as OJ, "it ain't my fault!!!!":::::unk rappers get~a~clappin' cuz I got this shit "locked" like a "bankvaults"// They goin play~a~reply yo, see your soul leave your body whole::::got as many losses than you got "votes" on this poll// play it like elder white folks, " Can't beleive he's goin to say this...::::replay it, see more "green O's" then the whole damn "Matrix"// Look to the heavens no more, me rappin enhances this sport::::demandin some more, leave victims buried, no trace, no more// daz , spits shit like "burst ceptic tanks"::::leave ya' mind blank, your rhymes rank like above 100, rhymes stank// Catch you by surprise, towered like "Ming" over "Franchise":::be wise when you battle, caught off gaurd like "downed flies"// The ill killer called tha,Taktik, train~of~thought alters::::spit shells at your ankles, Mexi left dancin the "salsa"// hmmmmm uppin for votes lets go |
ya kid you bite, its obvious ya lack personals, be honest kid you kno im right, U like it from the back,cuz dats da only time ya hear "damn drastic ya ass is tight" Measures-less n It’s a-parent I stall your lot of punches like ‘parkin-sons’ disease, Ya script dont compare in any degree, I stay above your words like apostrophies, to be perfectly honest Im really surprised ya not sportin a no-show, KID its vital, cuz before I dropped this.!.the best verse(vs) in this the battle was the 'topic-title', you bout ta recieve a loss like a pass ta mr:moss, soonas you accepted this you lost, Only time your spits or shits r lethal is when you have-no-floss or ya pants-is-off, im sick for days ......while drastic's still licking gays like BI victim sticken with aids, measure his game, easier to overcome than playin the blind n winning in charades, Damn, If by some miracle you win this shit I’ll only have one thing to question, Ya ill admit that’s a hot drop but who wrote it, maybe you can give him a mention, ya looking for tyson’s x-rays, da way ya scanning da net for punches tryna be a star, ya close to boo’s(booze) like alcoholics da way ya verse is only fresh between the bars, |
you wrote like 26 lines???.it clearly stated 10 to 15......
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took some out
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there ya go nothing changed |
awwwww dayum i cant now hey iam going to re-set da battle
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just copy and paste yo verse nothin changed
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dis battle is closed i just pm strobe go to da other thread and re-post yo verse da same way
yo props for u mayne |
you still posted 18 lines in the other thread...lol....wats with that dm
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Voted For: ¤ÐÅž¤
lol good good battle. both verses, had good personals, and the punches were top notch for real. i gave it to daz cuz he was a newb wit a verse like dat, and that shows good elevation. Also cuz damn drastic, yo chill, cuz ya verse needs to be better structured |
This was feedback posted for DrasticMeasureZ
looks good yall.. im not gonna vote tho.
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ
vote: Drasticmeasurez Drasticmeasurez: nice structure, good wordplay, nice meta's and multi's, not really any personals but ya got my vote Daz: flawless structure, good wordplay, some ok multi's, ok meta's, not really any personals good shit from both of u |
return the honest vote Livin Legend vs realsitnicca386, Livin Legend vs Mc *Maze*, Livin Legend vs Infector Mindz, Livin Legend vs Snook
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