Trooper vs The Kid P-Dizzle
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8 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 3-0 Is Ko Nuff Said u called me out~~ Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-11-04 at 04:23 PM Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in. |
The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 08:24 PM.
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I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets
Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz... I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper... This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food... Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime... (His stage name is Jimmy Pocketz and he's from Detroit "The D". That's all I need to explain...) |
Trooper has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 01:11 AM.
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Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's" u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals |
I didnt hit space bar on the 3rd Bar
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
trooper- ummm those punches was weak as fuck. looks like you ran out of similies and diseases and famous people to talk about. switch you style up, its become boring and weak. the simlies and metas werent good at all, thats all i can say....4/10 p-dizzle: ya shit was iight i mean i expected you to come a lil bit harder. flow was off, the wordplay/personal on his aim was iight but not the shit. punches other than that were dope tho so good job mostly.....7/10 v//the kid p-dizzle Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for The Kid P-Dizzle
haha that is the funniest shit ever , you merked him ... I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper
You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper... ^that is to funny |
Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
Lets Keep it Actually on Factuals you dont have any Factions You Resemble a Spine Injury Victim~~Come with no Actions I took this as you were implying like someone with complete paralysis...and that is rare in most spinal injuries...because there are so many different injuries....so i give it a 6/10 You will Never "Shyne" in any of your Delivered Rhymes or Lines Dizzle Givin out "Gifted Scriptures" is like 16 Bars spit by Mime's why was shyne in quotes? you didn't take that anywhere, you might as well have said shine...the bottom line was ok....7/10 Dont Underestimate your Commander and Chief Let me be Bleek Take's Lyricism to Write like Tonsel'Itis Im takein away your Speech this was pretty clever, i give it an 8/10 Your 9-2 So you Only Surface once in a while Like "Field Mole's" u Droppin Sic is like an Ankle and Knee Amputee kickin Field Goals this had me laughin, kind of a played concept, but you were creative with it...so 8/10 over all 29/40 I'll put the "mac" to ya "dynasty" like Tracy to the Rockets Jimmy reps the D 'cuz he wants what's in between my pocketz... the first line kind of lacked, but was picked up by the 2nd, nice work, 7/10 I'm not Iraqi but I'll decapitate this Trooper You ass, I'm cleanin' this shit off RV, it's The Kid Pooper-Scooper... this was decent, kinda funny, but nothin special....7/10 This jerk is rude but I'ma merk this dude Troop puts in plenty of work on the corner - will work for food this was a good multi, good punch, 9/10 Go back to "Council"-ing, sayin' you'll KO me in 8 lines I just killed you, oh fuck, I just commited a hate crime i got the hate crime line...but i felt it was kind of stretched, so 7/10 as you can see it was a close battle, but kid p-dizzle edged it out by 1 point good battle, much respect to both of you |
Voted For: Trooper
um good battle both were good but not the est ive seen from ya Troop: um i was feelnig ya shit but ya forgot to space ya 3rd bar um ya lines were streched though ya flow and sturce went good ya punches were really good and so was ya personals KID: UM YA HAD MULTIS BUT IT WONT DO GOOD YA DID REAL BAD BUT I NO THAT WASNT YA BEST VERSE BUT SORRY MAN I GOTTA GIVE THIS TO TROOP FOR A BETTER VERSE VOte trooper |
This was feedback posted for Trooper
good drop both... just checking the polls
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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle
i'm it was all good both get a handshake but only one can win: kid the was good wordplay and punch that forsho nice flow and stlye nice closer but opener was wack personals were good i saw one mult 8/10 J tro great flow but i didn't like the punhes or pessonals it was kinda wack there were some thing i didn't get no mult that i saw nice opener but bad closer 6/10 winer is the kid |
Voted For: Trooper
Im Votin For Troop, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, But Troop Came A Little Harder With His Punches Tho... |
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Alrighty then....let me re-vote this again then...
Trooper - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 8.2/10 The Kid P-Dizzle - Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 7.5/10 Overall Trooper gets my vote overall iz becuz basically..he had harder punches than Dizzle...a better structure and a nice vocab to it tho... Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Should be 3-2, maybe even 3-1. Uppin' for more votes...
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