Age Is Jus A Number!
 

who knew that u could mean this much
and that i would miss that special touch
so now i'm fuckin bored with nuthin to do
so i have to jus sit back and think about u
u standing there with a beautful white smile
u sayin ''i love ya'' made my heart beat miss for awhile
i was searchin the web not knowin it could change my life
meet a guy i was hopin Kali Nicole Grove, thats right ur wife
thats just had to turn for the worest
going for 3 days and our love was curest
i'm 14 and in 19 days u'll be 19
to me it was nothin 4 years inbetween
to the law it was rape and u couldn't go to jail
so should i sit back and jus say ''OH WELL''?
age is jus a number and i really love u
why should the police control my life and say what i can do
to me i think we gave the cops to much power
who the hell gave them the right and empower
i think i know that i'm running my life right
so why should a guy get arested when he says ''love ya good-night''
why can't people jus step back, i might be 14 but i got a mind of my own
and no one is going to stop me from calling my guy on the phone!

wow, that was well hot haha , but i was feelin it , ya age is jus a numba, but i wouldnt go anything below 2 years younger than me , but no hate thats jus me, keep droppin feelin it peace

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Yo I thought it was good and I really liked it...The only thing I can say is put more emotions into ya poem and u will be alright...

so... i think it was good... i remember u tellin me bout this the other day... c i can remember things that i want 2... and some that i dont lol.. well i'll c u at school

nice

ay nice drop...had good emotion...and i got a friend goin thru somethin similar...she is 15 and her man is 19...crazy...but if u got feelins fa em then do what you feel...keep da drops comin...return da favor...peace 1

i think it was wack...i said it...

BE NICE!!!,if you say something is "wack"tell the person why, and what they could have done better...

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i second that

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i was really feelin this peice it conveyed a good message and i was from the heart....u have some talent...i can help someone like u....p.m me if your interested