livin legend vs A.K.A.
 

Battle Rules:

20 - 25 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
all noramal rules

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 09-12-04 at 09:20 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

A.K.A. has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 09:20 PM.

it really suppose to be 20-45 line not 20-25 sorry for the fuck up

Livin Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 09:25 PM.

ATTENTION: listen to A.K.A. it is 20 to 45 lines not 20 to 25

20-45 lines

like lost souls ya talent has yet to be seen
u float around in the free agent pool yelling get me a team
u couldn't get one so u had to "create-ya-own"
have ya life changing like u going through the "matrix-phone"
ya claim be one of the greatest but ya not
lyrics swell ya head up with bruises and "swollen-knots"
the heater 187 ya ass like a "patrolling-cop"
ya back should be a heater cause it holds "alot-of-clips"
have ya ass worked up going after me like bloods and "rival-crips"
u the bubba "sparxx-type"
thinking u gangsta just cause u "sparked-light"
the pump that i carry will send u flying
ya body will look like u got eaten by a lion
ya 17-12 if u was real artist u still have more "records-to-sell"
u beating me is like saying tyson "beckford's-a-male"
so u wanna get "suited-up"
all u got is shit coming out ya mouth so u might as well "use-ya-butt"
the rebirth of this nigga ain't gonna happen
he'll crawl back inside the womb when he hears the heater "start-clapping"
i'll connect ya blood stains like i'm in algebra and i'm "chart-graphing"
i ain't cassidy but ya lyrics won't get no better
heater slice ya skin off i wear it like a sweater
i'll connect ya body parts like the westside connection
45. put ya body in the boston crab like were wrestling
i'm the next best thing u can't even "stop-me"
take more shots at ya ass then a game of "hockey"
no matter how hard u spit you'll never "knock-me"
punchlines hit harder then left hooks from "rocky"
u want my lyrics to get this win so you'll "paste-and-copy"
this is what i do as my job while u "make-it-a-hobby"
i'll have ya girl stripping down waiting "naked-in-the-lobby"
have ya brain strung off a fix like whitney and bobby
ya reach for ya pump but i'm quit to the shotty
two holes in ya sternum leave some lead in ya body
ya put the time limit at three days to spit
that's probably because u have to prewrite ya shit
i got the traits of a legend
intentions to cave ya "head-in"
u ain't got no hid dan "tal-ent"
i won look at the votes nigga "count-em"



*EXPLANTIONS*
1.)"have ya life changing like u going through the "matrix-phone" (THEY WOULD CHANGE PLACES WHEN THEY TALKED ON THE PHONE)
2.)"ya back should be a heater cause it holds "alot-of-clips" (I'LL SHOOT HIM WHEN HE RUNS AWAY)
3.)"u the bubba "sparxx-type" (HAS A PIC OF SPARXX IN HIS SIG)
4.)"thinking u gangsta just cause u "sparked-light" (LIGHTER)
5.)"u beating me is like saying tyson "beckford's-a-male" (I THINK BECKFORD'S GAY)
6.)"so u wanna get "suited-up" (HIS CREW NAME, CHECK HIS SIG)
7.)"i ain't cassidy but ya lyrics won't get no better (HAS A PIC OF CASSIDY IN HIS SIG AND CASS'S SONG)
8.)"i'll connect ya body parts like the westside connection" (HAS A PIC OF ICE CUBE IN HIS SIG)
9.)"take more shots at ya ass then a game of "hockey" (IF U LOOK REAL CLOSE CASSIDY HAS A HOCKEY HAT ON *NHL*, SUCH DETAIL)
10.)"have ya brain strung off a fix like whitney and bobby" (THEY USE DOPE)
11.)"u ain't got no hid dan "tal-ent" (THAT'S HIS AIM SCREEN NAME, CHECK HIS PROFILE)

yo check it:

don't call youself dat cause losing to me ain't legendary, it normal//
I spit my bars then you staring at me like this cat must be abnormal//
I even got you mama mad cause I came to you funeral all formal//
I do songs cause my hooks stronger then those of king kong//
u wanna do 45 lines, well u could beat me if u spit sumtin 100 bars long//
i saw this dude, he was trying to act like a gangsta in bilabong//
wen i finished rippin this dude biggie came n siad I’m dead wrong//
you gonna be just like him cause after this ya’ll both gonna be gone//
this cat didn't no that i'm a 5 star general wen it comes to war//
and that i'm an energizer bunny when catz asking for more//
i got a big friend so basically u aint gonna be livin dat long, forsure//
you ain't no fuckin legend i mean damn your record is 8-6//
and you definally ain't a real baller if you rootin for the knicks//
and if you could find your girl well she on my dick, i love dat slut chick//
if you really a livin legend then you gonna be dead quick//
no need to pic a mask cuz I punch girls and dudes wit glasses//
to tell u how hard he is dis dude wen to private skool n took thug classes//
if ya’ll don’t get my disses then you must be slow like molasses//
and if you do hit me/ then I guarantee that you going down wit me//
I tell haters that if they really want it then they can come and git me//
bar after bar/ you gonna leave this wit no less then a scar//
and before I’m done the whole fucking site is gonna call me a tsar//
fuck you/ fuck your crew/ fuck ya ma and the man who/ screw/ wit her//
stay home dawg cause mama gonna wonder y u ain’t wit your babysitter//
I’m quick man/ the flow it like quick sand/ but it ain’t no kitty litter//
I’m only half way done/ and you lost your son/ and empty gun//
so the only smart thing that you can do is run//
what I’m doing in 45 lines I could da got it done in ten//
I wanna kill you but I’m just another one of them many men//
see my debut was your death date/ and you ain’t gonna be late//
I’m amuned to it cause I no that cats just love to hate//
keep doing it and you gonna be in rehab like mary-kate//
I’ll take on ne rapper I ain’t fickle/if u accept then u in a pickle//
I’m CCCP, bring it to you wit that hammer and sickle//
I been doing bricks and kilos and this pussy couldn’t handle a nickel//
you pathetic/ not athletic/ cause this dawg is too fat to play any sports//
I don’t give a shit you can call me bart cuz you can eat my shorts//
if you new the kid than you could dis me cause I’m short//
but when I’m having problem I keep going and snort//
unlike you, you wear a bra for support//
dawg spot fronting your tit can’t be called pecks//
this dude had to go look for a suit in spandex//

good shit aka, uppin

Voted For: A.K.A.

Ok, both of you came a little long-winded in this battle. You both came with aight punches and structure, didn't really see much wordplay from either of you though. For the length of these verses I'ma have to consider variety here, and Legend you spent like the whole first half of your drop talking about shooting him. AKA you came with some better disses also, so you got my vote here...
Vote - AKA

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Voted For: A.K.A.

Nice battle...both had some hot shit. But I liked AKA structure abit more then LL. And the punches he threw hit abit harder then LL. There we some multis but they looked like they were forced. Both of yaw had nice shit though. This was a great battle to judge.

This was feedback posted for A.K.A.
 

yo, dayum son dat shiit wuz tight!... da flow wuz good 'n most of da lyrics were off da hook... dat wuz a tight ass drop!

Voted For: A.K.A.

A.K.A.-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Livin-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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Voted For: A.K.A.

iight this was a pretty decent battle but ima have to hand this one to A.K.A he came made harder then Living...

Living
your verse was iight but ive seen alot better ..your puchlines werent really hitting hard....your personals were okay...i guess but none were really imazing....structure was okay but i kept jumpin .... multies....were pretty decent but seen better and some could have been worded alot better aswell...overall pretty decent verse ..but not enough to win this battle

A.K.A
pretty hot verse..your structure was alittle off and i really didnt like those / slash's in your verse you should have just seperated them with a , comma or something of that nature... your mulites were hot..and i really liked them..punchlines were hitten hard... personals were pretty good some were really good...structure was okay but i didnt like that i stated before the slash's in the verse...overall nice battle but ima have to give this one to a.k.a nice battle both

overall vote=aka
keep it up both nice decent battle