Empire vs street legend
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Links
No Quotes

You keep going for 12 lines im starting to think you have a prewrite we set the battles up whore were the vet crew and im the vet battler and you dont get elevated you dont deserve it you aint got 5 wins you refuse this and its a no show :gfy:

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-11-04 at 04:24 AM

Must drop verse in 2000 minutes after check in.

Street Legend has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 10:56 PM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-09-04 11:26 PM.

did you drop yet or you prewriting like you said you never do fucking ho drop now

Try to 'ride' but when 'mindz kollide' i collapse active brain waves(1)
Flow 'mastered' listen 'bastard' as i rap and collapse ya mainframe
Not 'hot' occupation the 'block' man why you dont stop fronting(2)
You 'weak' yous a 'legend in the street' at dick riding and cock sucking(3)
No 'struggling' claim you 'hustling' on the block moving that crack work(4)
But yous a 'joke' real hustlers woulnt even be 'broke' on rap verse(4)
Must be 'slow' this 'ho' just force me to smash and whore um
You 'ass' whole crew 'trash' thats why you last in the forum(5)







EXPLANITIONS there are alot of personals so read this too understand basically my whole verse is personals-
1)mindz kollide is his crew
2)his profile says his occupation is the block
3)his name is street legend
4)His hot mail name is b-more hustla but he only has 15 r.v dollars hes even broke here ....lmao
5)his crew is the last one on crew page all the ways at the bottom

yo,

My lyrical wrath is catastropic, deep inside you envee me
suspciously, i dont think you can beat me dependently
you gonna be embarresed after this lose fallin in pits
ya kindergarden lyrics portrays that ya got noncomposmentis
i think you was born to infuriate, niggas annoyed wit ya post
this fruit is "sweet" in simplest terms he's infested wit "glucose"
empire has been flagellated, unbeaten record put in the cementary
we can tell by ya strange attire that you are eleemosynary(supported by charity)
you to confident ya cocky but Rv knows ya average kid
Ima "collapse this empire" like he was "Roman" even vets say that ima cataylist

Voted For: Empire

Empire had the better disses here, but one line that stood out for streetlegend was the eleemosynary line. That was tight. I just though a lot of what Street bought to the table metaphorically was weak. didn't feel the glucose line all that much. Empire threw punches left and right that were landing. Legends gave a bad intro which left a bad impression for the rest of the verse which was a little better than that intro. cause it was weak.

Empire takes this.

This was feedback posted for Street Legend
 

checkin out the battle.....n posts n shit....nice verses...

Voted For: Street Legend

yo im gonna vote for street because.. its not very fair that empire explains his lines.. because i wouldnt have understood any of his punches otherwise... i think street legend had better vocab.. punches were probably tied.. but only cause empire explained em.. so all together this was a REALLY CLOSE battle.. but i think street legend got it due to the fact his vocab was SICK

Voted For: Street Legend

Booo @ this battle. I really thought i would see better from both of you. Street Legend had some OK attempts at being witty while Empire just wasn't.....sorry, but you were lacking in the whole wit department. I guess I gotta give this one to Street cause atleast it seemed like he tried to come up with some original concepts....

Vote - Street Legend

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ok ones a fucking dr the others a hate vote you are botrh now blacklisted fucking faggot ass whores :gfy:

Voted For: Empire

Empire -punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out..

Street Legend -yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..

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damn Empire...cryin cuz i got some votes??? lol

pussy its squared up

This was feedback posted for Empire
 

just checkin it out empire took it no doubt this guy street legend got someone to vote for him i kno it but he still good im not saying im better cuz i aint or i might be idk realy but anyway empire has this but im mad that i cant vote.

^^kid....stfu...got somebody to vote for me....LMAO....do i look like Empire...if u sayin im gettin somebody to vote for me...then y is Sik Wit it always votin on Empire battles...man yall crack me up lol