*+*ludacris*+* vs WORDPLAYA
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 150

Check in by: 09-13-04 at 12:01 PM

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*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 12:14 PM.

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WORDPLAYA has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 12:22 PM.

go ahead an spit ya verse ima
spit right after u aight

yo dis nigga think he got class//
but im the 1 with class cuz i just kicked this basterds ass//
i will soon be at no1 spot this dick rider cnat rhyme 4 his gay life//
he a wanker fucking his sis trying to rap but he not hes crap imma slit his body with a knife//
bitch,basterd,wanker,dick head w.e u wanna call him im on da myk splitin my lyics he nos hes gonna lose//
hes spilts his crap lyics on da muther fucking myk hes nos hes gotta take a hike be4 i slap him silly hes just heard da news//
i won da battle easy as shit the cunt new it was gonna hapen so he ran away cuz he new i wud slap him silly//
the basterd says he has class hes has nothing but a red ass//
cunt cunt on da mky spilting his shit think hes got it easy but he dont no how i am good with all my class//

ive split ur turn

get off 'Ludacris' nuts bitch go head n 'Stand Up'
ridin dick like a roller coaster rides wit yo hands up
why da fuck u jockin names dawg 2 feel like a sTAR
but u not take out da S leave where da dinosaurs are
FIRE UP DAT DRO u don't kno wut dro is y its in ya sig
like Word of Mouf bet u do spit Cum dats y think u sik
but dat shit aint gettin u rich.......... so y don't u quit
money so low saw u at da Casino wit...... Micro-Chips
u fuckin bitch better yet Chicken.... go get me a Beer
strictly dickly like a queer HEAR i cum 2 fuck u n da EAR
already started off bad stealin names u not from da south
So do like yo idol u fuckin faggot it's bout time u ROLL OUT

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

Vote wordplaya

FOr personal line about the ludacris NUTS , better flow, better structure, closer and opener,

get off 'Ludacris' nuts bitch go head n 'Stand Up'
ridin dick like a roller coaster rides wit yo hands up
Dope

already started off bad stealin names u not from da south
So do like yo idol u fuckin faggot it's bout time u ROLL OUT
Dope

LUDACRIS, basic rymes, nothing stood out. punches wernt hard and they werent even close to being good. up your vocab and use of wordplay and you could get better

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thanx 4 ya vote Ice Pick
im still uppin 4 sum more
honest votes ya

This was feedback posted for WORDPLAYA
 

o my goodness gracious !!!!!!!!!...its a wrap...i aint even gna get thoro about dis vote....MAFUCKIN OBVIOUS

punches - wordplaya...o my lord...ludacris got SMASHEDDDD....only maybe 1 or 2 barz didnt come wit a hard punch...other then that...luda jus got raped !!! lololol

Metas - Word...verse was pretty tite...i was feelin it alil bit n i dont really respect most verses on dis site...good shyt...only thing i wud say is corny about ur verse is dat u was overdoin da ludacris shyt alil 2 much...some of it was corny but the rest came pretty hard fam !

Wordplay - word...his shyt was simple yet it was so ill...i give props...IDK WHAT THE FUCK LUDA was doin...im sorry but u have no resemblance of ludacris's skills or flow simple n plain

Enjoyment - do i even have to say...game over


"bitch,basterd,wanker,dick head w.e u wanna call him im on da myk splitin my lyics he nos hes gonna lose"...o my lord...u are garbage...i aint tryin to be rude or nuttin but that shyt is fuckin horendous...wait i change my mind...ur shyt was so wack i need to be rude so that u realize that u have no bizzness rappin !!!!!!!!! lolol...jus post in da lyricist lounge...loloolololol even tho ur far from a lyricist !!!!!


Vote - Wordplaya...LMAO


(i was rude as shyt huh !!!! lmao i font giva fuck nigga !!!!!)


~1~



awwwww shyt....150 post to vote...aint dat some shyt i jus realize that now...lol i guess im da dumb 1 then...to rap this battle up every1 needs to just post my exact feedback 5 times cuzz i speak the dead truth...pease nigga !

thanx still uppin diss battle
so cum vote n help me close
it ya i will return da favor

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

lol u u took it... this is a honest vote
punches//wp
meta's//wp
multi's//wp
structure//wp

ludacris(another cat who should change his name) u need to up ya skills alot, your rap was very stretched and had very weak meta's also work on ya structure

Voted For: WORDPLAYA

VOte:w
Lyrics: w
Structure:w
Wordplay: w
Personals: w
Punches: w
Wit and originality: w
OPenig: w
Enmding:w

Overall: dis battle was a strait up K>O. luda ur shit was mistructure yea it rhymed every wear but it flowed like shit. try less syllables and less emphasis on tryin get multies they got fuk all weighting in tha vote neways man. Peecae to all of y'll

still uppin for 2 more votes ya
so cum n vote we'll return da favor