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Tanto 09-10-04 04:26 PM

day-um
 
told by a man scorned in life
alls i got from my girl is 'negativity' and strife
i waisted alot a time on a girl i thought was going to be mine
the hoe fell short of a nickle and niggas still think shes a dime
damn dawg i should've seen it comin'
'william told' but i didnt hear the drummer drum'n
i have my head phones on
but i still hear nigga's whispering ova my song
"nigga must be dumb to let that go"
but they dont realize she ruins life slow
i relapsed and she was my cancer
sat there and devowerd my heart and i let her
in the paper today"young man died at the age 24"
"for givin' his heart to a retired whore"
disconnect me from this matrix,i cant take it no more
as i sit here and watch my pride fall through the floor
day-um dawg this all seemed so real
heart shattering thats all i could feel
all the pieces cleaned up by a maid
at the beginning all i was trying to do was get laid

Tanto 09-13-04 08:29 PM

i need feedback on this piece...


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