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*+*ludacris*+* vs Jay-Z
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 09-13-04 at 04:43 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
*+*ludacris*+* has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 05:13 PM.
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luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground//
this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound// hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud// ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud// i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win// this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min// basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad// im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad// gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat// theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet// my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick// we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick// |
Check>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>in>>>batty>man>>>>>
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coem on heck in n drop yo verse mon
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r 4 fuck sake check in n drop yo verse
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Jay-Z has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-11-04 08:39 AM.
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I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits
Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick & Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro.. Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro! Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet.. I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet.... |
hahaha Dat NIGGA HAD 0 PUNCHLINES.. LOOOOOOL
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Voted For: Jay-Z
hahaha, yours made me laugh. I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits nice opener ^8/10 Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick funny ass shit right there ^9/10 & Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro.. eh a lil weak^5/10 Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro! ^4/10 Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet.. I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet.... ^8/10 6.8/10 luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground// this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound// hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud// ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud// i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win// this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min// basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad// im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad// gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat// theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet// my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick// we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick// you got a 4/10 jus cuz it wasnt as hard as jay's metas// jay punches/jay flow//jay structure/luda personals/jay n luda score/jay opener closer/jay winner/jay drop an honest vote .. its in my sig luda u can do alot better jus dont stretch ya rhymes out so much, and hit them harder |
Voted For: Jay-Z
this was more of a non streched lines luda change yer name no hate but serious do that same with jay-z you guys should change yer name yer pretty good for newbs so i would do that but anyway: punches:luda metas:no one multi's: jay-z vocab: jay-z flow:jay-z luda had streched lines openers: jay-z closener: jay-z once again streched lines luda v/jay-z return the favour in my battle verse shake-spear the link is in mys ig thanks and explain yer vote like i did for you |
Voted For: Jay-Z
Ahh! Jay z, n ludacris in the house.. (kiddin) Jay's verse I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick 7.3/10 put together well.. & Shit.. Im Living My Life.. Ripping The Ice.. And Smoking Dro.. Ayo I Lost My Fone.. Wait It's In Ludacrisses Afro! 4/10 this could of been worded diff, but its ok Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet.. I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet.... 7/10 hah another funny one 7/10 Nice drop jay, personals, flow structure, and vocab fit real well pretty nice. Luda's verse luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground// this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound// 6/10 pretty good. hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud// ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud// 2/10 not really feelin this.. i dotn lyk gay thats y im taking them all out 1 by 1 i will shout i win// this battle has only just opend but soon as we drop it will be closed in a min// 3/10 ... basterd basterd on da myk rapping his wack rhymes thinking his bad// im winning this cunt 4-0 up he nos im gonna win so hes getting mad// 4/10 .. gay gay gay guy wus up u got beat its called gay got defeat// theres a gay guy on da corner waiting 4 u 2 to meet// 0/10 LMAO! what was that. my m8 said he seen u in da gay bar basterd bar n loads more hes seen u kissing the gay guys dick// we not u want to have it off in da gay bar u no u want to steal micks dick n then lick// 3/10 hmm.. 5/10 Luda ur intro was Good!,punches and flow.. but u exceeded the line limit and ur last few verses i wasn't really feelin u could get better. that's why i voted for jay... return the fave in the sig.. later |
Voted For: *+*ludacris*+*
LUDA GOT DIS HANDS DOWN YO JAY-Z NICE VERSE AND PUNCHES AND FLOWZ BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARDER DAN LUDA// NICE MAYNE LUDA NICE MAYNE PUNCHES WAS HITTING IT AND DA FLOW WAS FLOWIN NICE JAY WORK ON YO STRUTURE ~PEACE~ LUDA RETURN AN FAV |
Voted For: Jay-Z
] Jay-Z - Yo punches were hard and they landed... Yo structure was pretty~decent & it didn't stretch~out (or nuttin)... Your flow mayn...it was pretty nice..it didn't fall once... And your vocab was pretty good...easy to read it & all... 5/10 *+*ludacris*+* - Yo punches were hard to..pretty much they connected also... Tha structure was okay..hardly stretch'd out... Flow was pretty decent too...didn't fall... And your vocab was aight too... 4/10 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: Jay-Z
this was easily taken by jayz.but ludacris had a better flow (which wasnt even an aspect really) and jay-z had better punches like his finisher: Ya Fucking Wid Jigga.. Da Nigga? Who's The Best Vet.. I Seen Better Drop's Than Yours In The Toilet.... thats what killed it right there...luda came to simple.he had just a basic verse and it was straight up weak (no hate): IP: luda luda on da myk diss this battle down to da ground// this bitch thinks his rich coz he found a penny in a mound// hes calls himself j-z hes not even gonna get 1 word in lyk he wud// ill slap da nigga to da ground get the basterd face andput it in da mud// sorry dawg but that was wack.jayz takes this one for the punches and metas... another line i liked from jay: I;ll Kill-herbs .. With Illwords.. And My Lyrical Spits Son, The Only Time U Beatin "whites".. Is Cumin With Ya Dick |
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