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sunshine 07-01-02 03:43 AM
That shit is kool i can relate to that

Ibro_Palic 07-01-02 05:05 AM
Deam girl, hold up, thats shid was blazin, but if it ware directed to me it be amazin, shid was hot

MilKMaN 07-01-02 03:49 PM
it was ok... word usage was simple..flow was ok stayed consistant... message was aiight... the feel of the verse felt more like poetry than a verse... nothing spectacular but it was a good read

ace 07-07-02 01:18 AM
uppin. new verse added

LACK OF LOGIC 07-07-02 01:33 AM
I LIKED IT THE SINCERITY YET STILL GULLY AND RESPECTIVE STATURE IS HARD TO MAIN TAIN AS FOR SLEEPERS HEY IT HAPPENS I BARELY GET PEEPED AND KNOW IM BETTER THAN A HIGH PERCENTAGE OF THESE CATZ

ace 07-07-02 10:58 PM
good shit uppin

ace 07-08-02 10:54 PM
not again.....uppin

C.F.C 07-08-02 11:49 PM
cute concept, but due to lack of originality and subpar writing this piece came off as corny



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CyKoShYnE 07-09-02 01:27 AM
Good Shit Im feeling the a this flowed, I could sorta relate


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