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young_buckshot vs Big Woody
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young_buckshot has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 11:37 PM.
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Big Woody has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 11:38 PM.
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look at this punk his names big woody,creep up on tha coward mask and hoodie,the thing about you,is your a fukked up hair do(avatar) mask and gloves knife in tha back,venom spittin white boy ready to attack,you aint go no game your shit is all tha same,im supprised more ppl dont tell u your lame,computer gansta,real life wanksta,sukk a dick prick im realesin anger,gott no time fer this,i gotta go and piss
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This guy said he needs some practice like his shit is really hot......
Ima let my rhymes take ova and tie his ass up in a pretzel knot..... And i'll throw a fury of of fist combos to find a weak spot..... Kause you're sorry and u smell like sumthing is rotting..... I think that's a bump on your head from tha brain clotting..... While you're stuck like duh...duh... let me try and explain..... I think you are better off jacking this win like Iraqis do airplanes |
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This was feedback posted for young_buckshot
yung work on yo structure you cant see the rhymes...
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Voted For: Big Woody
Woody-punches were a slight harder, tha flow was ok and tha structure was in place & not stretch'd~out.. Young_b-yo shit was ok..punches could've been a little~harder..and tha flow was ok would've gottin' my vote if tha punches were a little harder tho..and yo structure lack'd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Big Woody
flow and punches goes to woody easily. buckshot came kinda weak, "gotta go and piss"? wat the hell? u need to elevate man Anyway woodys verse was way more elevated, basically on another level to buckshot. Please return the favour by voting fairly on my battle http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=149116 |
Voted For: Big Woody
This guy said he needs some practice like his shit is really hot...... Ima let my rhymes take ova and tie his ass up in a pretzel knot..... And i'll throw a fury of of fist combos to find a weak spot..... ^^^^^^^^^^^ yo nice verse mayne nice punches were good could been betta Kause you're sorry and u smell like sumthing is rotting..... I think that's a bump on your head from tha brain clotting..... While you're stuck like duh...duh... let me try and explain..... I think you are better off jacking this win like Iraqis do airplanes ^^^^^^^^^^ aight nice punches were good but could been betta /6/10 look at this punk his names big woody,creep up on tha coward mask and hoodie,the thing about you,is your a fukked up hair do(avatar) mask and gloves knife in tha back,venom spittin white boy ready to attack,you aint go no game your shit is all tha same,im supprised more ppl dont tell u your lame,computer gansta,real life wanksta,sukk a dick prick im realesin anger,gott no time fer this,i gotta go and piss BAD STRUTURE NO FLOWZ// COMPLICATED READIN// BUT YO PUNCHES DIDNT HIT HARD DAN BIG WOODY U GET CREACTIVE WITH IT AND USE HARDER PUNCHES WORDPLAYS MULTI'Z PUNCHES WERE WEAK MAYNE HIT HARD V-BIG WOODY YO BIG RETURN AN FAV HOMIE |
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Voted For: Big Woody
Aight, Woody Got This.. His Finisher Hit Hard, Not Many Humouress Disses Or Punches From Either, But Woody Gets My Vote 4 Better Structured More Compex Verse n His Finisher Killed It... Return The Favor Ya'll P E A C E |
Voted For: Big Woody
Vote: big woody Lyrics: tied OPening: big w Ending: Big w..........dis was a sick ass ending line.....BLAP!!! Multies: young b Wordplay: neither Metas: neither Punches:tied Overall: tied battle almost but i jus went crazy for big w's ending dat was so sik...one of best endings i seen on RV. nuff respect |
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