2gethor forever
 

yo me and monique goin 2gethor forever...
to your perfect love i'll always surrender...
when i'm wit you i feel fully legit... :thumbup:
when i'm wit you i feel the need to hit...
but i'd rather spit the my love for ya...
yeah
i'll love you forever until the end of time...
i wont ever hurt you when ever i rhyme...
i will never throw away my dreams for you...
i want it jus us two and no one elts coo...



yo this was a freestyle my real love is a really long song...
but i'll still type it... :thumbup:

no the greatest thing i have ever seen... not even emotional ....too short.. nothing making me go .."wow" ..you feel me..with that many post how can you suck so much?....

maybe you should post your real love song..... ohhh fuck it i dont wanna see it...................

pz

ha ha ha no doubt. man that was weak. u shouldnt have even posted it

hm..i really wasnt feelin this drop...this wasnt very imaginative....or Emotional....
you really need to elevate....and look into what a real good droplooks like..overall keep it up and you should do okay...

thanx for real feed back...^^^
the other mutha fucka's didnt kno that this was a warm up...

Nigga U Been Warming Up Since The Bench For Players Was Made.....

Fuck Outta Here U'll Never Be Hot Or Drop Hot This Shit Sucks Its Trash Fuck U'r Love If U Cant Even Express It Right U Bitch Made Soft Ass Punk Ass Herb Fuck U And Bannd The Weak And Praze The Godly!!!!

she flip to hear you say that and why dont you drop love songs oh thats right you dont have a bitch.... fuck you owned mutha fucka....

keep tryin dawg n if it was a warm up i hope you bring more effort but w/e it was aight but nothin special...deff need more emotion n imagery in a song like this...pc

trus me there'll be more...

hey this is NoMercy's best freind i vote honest and give honest feedback my feedback for yer song and no hate but you need to elavate real bad yer opener was good but its like 2/10 not that good

peace
~1~ luv

thanx yo and i kno him too he my homie...

well i will sya it for you
Uppin:)

haha thanx yo...

lol just had to say that and peace man again im just trying to get 20 votes NoMercy wants some honest votes hes baggen on msn right now but he says only for 2 battles or they will think im Nomercy but im not and im voting honest but he dont want me to vote honest o well i learned everythign from him im jsut liek him same ability to rap almost but hes got way better rhymes period for his age