"Survival Of The Fittest" (By Dv/Pair A Dyce/McSky/Cin Laden)
 

beat - not bad. Old joint, but I like it.
1st cat - flow a little rough... Not bad, maybe just the first few lines - he doin aight now. Lines is ok. Shoulda posted lyrics - I cant hear some of his lines.
2nd - Not bad, flow is good. Got a kinda lazy style Fabolous styles. Like this cat. Good multis too.
3rd - Is this Smiley?? Wow - where you been at man? Emotion is upped from what I remember of you rappin with. Short verse. Not bad though.
4th - Like ya flow. Smooth flow on this joint. Prolly my fav verse on this joint.

Overall - good track ya'll - good looks. Return the fav in my sig you knoooOOOOOOW

I most definitely like this song DV i thought that the beat ya used was real good...reminded me a lil bit of a Rocky sample lol prolly was though...anyway all the cats in the track all dropped well and the flow and switches were all decent...i would prolly bump that shit if i could get it and i aint jokin that was a str8 up decent beat keep em comin

aight buffering...

1st mc-i could tell u got a comp mic already....i can barely hear wat ur sayin cuz ur quality is kinda iffy doggy,sorry,just being honest....and ur addlibs are way off...turn up ur vocals more son..
2nd mc-quality a lil better...sound a lil monotone,but this time i can understand u...make ur bars even,cuz sometimes it sounded like u rushin
3rd mc-ok talkin over ur nigga,lol,but ok,a lil hyper than da first 2,quality is da same as above,u slurred alot of words doggy,so i cant really understand some lines in there,work on dat...
4th mc-jcin,still spittin that gangsta shit ehh?u slurrin too,but ur quality stands out better out of the 1st 3...keep spittin

beat wise..ehh i aint feelin this beat at all,sounds kinda corny to me..lol...

anyways keep spittin fellas..let me do the mixing for our collab aight...


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Up. Yo.

i liked this a lot, tough beat cus its slow,nice theme too and title, i liked this a lot, nice smooth flows all the way through, nice job on this all of you, worked well together, keep doin it!!

word. thnx ma...

Our collab is gonna be sick

The thing I liked most bout this is yall got progressively more gangsta and clearer as the track went on... iunno it wasn't like listenin to one cat and havin to sit through the rest, it was like the track built up...- Deadly Im thinkin you were first, and I was feelin ur shit- flow was correct, I just say up emotion a lil bit and up the vocal volume a lil bit.... pretty decent annunciation, felt the beat... nice shit-

uppin this..

WOA son.. where u been ? ^^

i was feeling this track..


deadly: u elevating hella fuckign fast.. some of it i couldnt hear, but the flow was strait.. good job
2nd cat: getting better and better as the track goes on.. i like that.. flow was strait.. some nice lines..
3rd cat: lol this was tight.. i was feelin it.. still getting better and better..
4th cat:best verse in my opinion.. was really feelin the flow.. i liek dis..


overall track was nice.. alot better than most.. keep spitting and ima keep postin.. -1

Word thnx Cal. and smiley made a come back

hahaha

lmao yo look out for more songs of me on this side.. yo key get on aim man did you see the shit mike hosea was talkin? that kid is a fuckin clown he was doing the same thing to pair and i wasnt going to let him do it to me

holla

also this song is getting alot of replies on rapmusic dog. :laugh: wonder what it is on the charts now..

Word. He sucks dick.....lol fuck mike

Hahahaha Prolly on #2 or 3....hahaha am droppin some suprise for some crew...lol on this site

like the beat so far. ok first peerson came in. vocals are hard to understand. ur flow sounds too forced. vocals are low. not feelin it. 2nd person ... vocals are up now. i can hear the words lol tight i dunno, maybe i cant, it sounds like u put 2 vocals up to it, its kinda overlapped or something i cant understand the words at alot of parts flow is alright tho. 3rd person comes in, like the lyrics kinda echo'd, but i like tha flow. yep, still feelin this kid best so far. short part, next person. different typa kat. i like it tho. tight lyrics not as good as the dude b4 him tho. damn, short ass part as well. but all in all, the beat makes this track not suck. its like a mixture with developed mc's and beginer cats that dont seem to know what theyre doin yet. keep doin ur thing, ill always encourage rappers to be the best they can b. but the second to last dude was the best. now kindly respond to a track of mine or two. thanx